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Fallen Angel
The Holy feet from which you once bowed
Hath kicked you out of the heavens shroud
Fallen angel
once the morning star
The ground is shadowed with your wing
You carry the wind with a sinister sing
Once in the sky like a dark cloud shifting mercilessly to stay a flight...
You now rob the moon of its innocent light.
~Nourish
Published 19th Nov 2017
| Edited 20th Nov 2017
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19th Nov 2017 12:41pm
I like the falling from grace feel on this.a good rhyme carrying through.
"You now rob the moon from its innocent light" -killer line with really good imagery.
well penned 1Docmcruz
"You now rob the moon from its innocent light" -killer line with really good imagery.
well penned 1Docmcruz
20th Nov 2017 3:25am
20th Nov 2017 1:56am
nice write
this is a great Line - but change "from" to "of"
as in - "You now rob the moon of its innocent light"
20th Nov 2017 3:24am
Anonymous
29th Jan 2018 8:02pm
This one is great...
Must put for reading list...
Along with another favorite if mine "final descent" both great writes of the fallen
Must put for reading list...
Along with another favorite if mine "final descent" both great writes of the fallen
