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...And when IT Strikes...
Do you recall
your very first date?
Where you sat
and pondered future's fate?
She'd tell you, " Boy,
you better not ever make
me cry..."
You can't remember
the date, Yet two talked
incessantly, til late
He told her,
"I'm gonna be all you'll
ever need, no lie..."
Where goes tomorrow,
after being yesterday's
fateful mate?
Do we ever
question the relevance
of 'living in the moments' state
...seems irrelevant
after these moments die...
I wish I could
view the future...
before it pasts
maybe then
I'd have the knowledge
to teach how to make a love last...
I remember,
that I forgot
when everything was great
flowers, summer showers,
butterflies, cloudless skies,
passionate highs...
when so much beauty
filled me, while feeding
from love's plate...
your very first date?
Where you sat
and pondered future's fate?
She'd tell you, " Boy,
you better not ever make
me cry..."
You can't remember
the date, Yet two talked
incessantly, til late
He told her,
"I'm gonna be all you'll
ever need, no lie..."
Where goes tomorrow,
after being yesterday's
fateful mate?
Do we ever
question the relevance
of 'living in the moments' state
...seems irrelevant
after these moments die...
I wish I could
view the future...
before it pasts
maybe then
I'd have the knowledge
to teach how to make a love last...
I remember,
that I forgot
when everything was great
flowers, summer showers,
butterflies, cloudless skies,
passionate highs...
when so much beauty
filled me, while feeding
from love's plate...
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Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 12:36pm
Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 12:41pm
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 12:40pm
I wish I could
view the future...
before it pasts
maybe then
I'd have the knowledge
to teach how to make a love last...
If only we could do this bruh. There'd be a lot less heartaches and heartbreaks. The game of L.O.V.E. seems impossible to master. Nice poem bro.
view the future...
before it pasts
maybe then
I'd have the knowledge
to teach how to make a love last...
If only we could do this bruh. There'd be a lot less heartaches and heartbreaks. The game of L.O.V.E. seems impossible to master. Nice poem bro.
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 12:56pm
Shit u ain't Neva lie bro! I thank you graciously, n truly appreciate you always :)
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 2:52pm
Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 2:55pm
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 8:09pm
I've always wondered 'bout this same thing...!
And well..
I guess it's also the lack of experience in experiencing "Love"
is also partial to this point....
But dear poet, this work has glued itself to my heart,
so I'm keeping it..! :)
Such truths in this work...
Love,
-H-
And well..
I guess it's also the lack of experience in experiencing "Love"
is also partial to this point....
But dear poet, this work has glued itself to my heart,
so I'm keeping it..! :)
Such truths in this work...
Love,
-H-
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 3:27am
Oh you humble me my sweetness...
So happy to know you love liked it enough to add it to your RL...appreciate you much :)
So happy to know you love liked it enough to add it to your RL...appreciate you much :)
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
Anonymous
18th Nov 2017 8:22pm
No truer words spoken... If only *sighIng*
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 5:23am
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 8:57pm
To view the future that's one secrete hidden to man
great write..bravo!!
great write..bravo!!
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 11:47am
Yes, it is...n as you know we are all not only
writers, we are dreamers, which in turn makes us think of the impossible... lol
thanks bro. I truly appreciate the support...
:)
writers, we are dreamers, which in turn makes us think of the impossible... lol
thanks bro. I truly appreciate the support...
:)
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
18th Nov 2017 9:04pm
You're truly askin' the right question, Poe
Sure wish I had the answer for you.
Sure wish I had the answer for you.
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 11:53am
No worries my sweet one, I'm always seeking answers for stuff...lol...n Yea, thank you...grateful for your support always
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
Anonymous
18th Nov 2017 10:15pm
PM!!! Loved the poignancy to this heartfelt ink...such truth spoken, questions we’ve all asked and thought of...all of the what if’s and the coulda’ / shoulda’s would be eliminated...
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 11:56am
Sweet Taryn, just having a visit is more than enough, so big thanks...I'm truly grateful... :)
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 4:05am
This is absolutely beautiful. The tenderness comes through. Amazing and I loved it!!
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 12:00pm
Your comment is amazing, n I'm truly honored...thank you my sweetheart, I'm deeply grateful... :)
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
I wish I could
view the future...
before it pasts
But then what decisions would we make, or experience garner from such a knowledge of future becoming present?
Lovely write, my Friend. 📝
view the future...
before it pasts
But then what decisions would we make, or experience garner from such a knowledge of future becoming present?
Lovely write, my Friend. 📝
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 12:14pm
I couldn't hope to say, but I will say this...
Had I a way to do so, I'd definitely have a new career! lol...thank you my very wise friend, honored for your continued support n appreciate you always! :)
Had I a way to do so, I'd definitely have a new career! lol...thank you my very wise friend, honored for your continued support n appreciate you always! :)
Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
19th Nov 2017 5:40am
...strike it does..
right through!
expression
profound dear PM!
ink...some ink!
right through!
expression
profound dear PM!
ink...some ink!
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19th Nov 2017 12:18pm
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Re: Re. ...And when IT Strikes...
24th Nov 2017 12:18pm
The last part of ur comment makes me very sad...I'm so sorry my friend...I hope day, ur view will be much different...I do thank u, always for ur support.