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Lip Disservice
Gauze in the throat
holding hostage...
stifled screams
reductions invade
with obstructions
deconstructing
& gagging my esteem
Lips faltering
limp scraps of felt flail
failing
flimsy and numb
Anxiety drums...
like Medusa optics
spying as I'm stunned
Gripping this rip
caught in my taught
constricted - restricted
lungs
Panic's bass chords - fevered - strum...
Manacles beset my tongue
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Social anxiety is a CUNT.
Published 17th Nov 2017
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17th Nov 2017 12:37pm
17th Nov 2017 1:57pm
Social anxiety is a CUNT -lol this is such a true statement. my wife has social anxiety and every day can be a struggle, every single situation has to be handled with a meticulous touch.
excellent poem AtoMik
i really liked the screams,anxiety drums,Panic's bass chords - fevered - strum...
the best describing word that comes to mind is Paralysis
excellent poem AtoMik
i really liked the screams,anxiety drums,Panic's bass chords - fevered - strum...
the best describing word that comes to mind is Paralysis
17th Nov 2017 2:42pm
Bitch was too light of a word 😆
Tell her she has all of my empathy! <3
Thank you friends!
Tell her she has all of my empathy! <3
Thank you friends!
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Sep 2022 5:45pm
17th Nov 2017 11:51pm
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18th Nov 2017 1:46am
Anonymous
18th Nov 2017 3:34am
AtoMik.. this is truly brilliant.. you've got mad skills.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
19th Nov 2017 5:23am
Eek! I'm crawling with this one, the tension is palpable. I recognize the feeling all to well! You've captured it pointedly AtoMik well done :))
19th Nov 2017 6:22am
Oh crap. On one hand I'm thrilled that you felt that, on the other, I hope you didn't relate too much and struggle with social anxiety. Thank you so much!
19th Nov 2017 6:30am
Oh no, it was moving to know a friend could so well relate :)) It's a struggle I too live with but no extra burden to read your beautiful poem!
19th Nov 2017 6:33am
19th Nov 2017 6:40am
