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White Noise
Some days are just
white noise
A swirl of images
Easily forgotten
Moving
task.
to
task.
Until I miss-
a beat
Then the images revolt
And choke me with their
disgrace
disgust
distaste
Immobilized,
I close my eyes
And leave it up to fate
white noise
A swirl of images
Easily forgotten
Moving
task.
to
task.
Until I miss-
a beat
Then the images revolt
And choke me with their
disgrace
disgust
distaste
Immobilized,
I close my eyes
And leave it up to fate
Published 15th Nov 2017
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26th Nov 2017 3:59pm
I like your word choice and poem structure on this write RiverOfFire.
i feel the static of a T.V. blaring in the background and reruns forced into my mind over and over again.
well penned, keep'em coming.
i feel the static of a T.V. blaring in the background and reruns forced into my mind over and over again.
well penned, keep'em coming.
27th Nov 2017 2:14pm
Thanks a lot :) glad you enjoyed it and that the imagery I had in mind came across
