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Cuando tú amas...
Cuando tú amas
dale, regalo ella
tú...
Cuando tú amas
Desinteresado, desencadenado
cierto...
Bésala, abrázala
moldearla también ...
Cuando tú amas
Regalarlo, darle
tú...
Cuando tú amas
Permitirle su
lágrimas también ...
Abrazarlo, moldearlo
doblarlo, ajustado
tú...
Cuando tú amas
deja que se sienta libre
sin juicio
de ti...
Cuando tú amas
Él, ella, ella, él
usted, nosotros, nosotros, juntos,
lo hará a través de ...
*Translation*
When you love...
When you love
give her, gift her
you...
When you love
Unselfish, unchained
true...
Kiss her, hold her
mold her too...
When you love
Gift him, give him
you...
When you love
Allow him his
tears too...
Hold him, mold him
fold him, snug into
you...
When you love
let him feel free
without judgment
from you...
When you love
He, she, her, him
you, we, us, together,
will make it thru...
Published 12th Nov 2017
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12th Nov 2017 11:58am
12th Nov 2017 12:01pm
Yea, I can relate... Grateful as always for the continued support...
and appreciate you much.
and appreciate you much.
12th Nov 2017 12:06pm
Within 10 minutes of waking up and I am gifted with such a wonderful poem.
Thank You Poe for a beautiful day.
Thank You Poe for a beautiful day.
12th Nov 2017 12:08pm
Aaaawwww you lil sweetie... Ur welcome, n I truly thank u for the same by way of ur thoughts...
Grateful, always! :)
Grateful, always! :)
Anonymous
12th Nov 2017 12:41pm
Beautiful just beautiful... Big smile reading this <3
12th Nov 2017 12:46pm
Why thank you! I'm happy to hear it made you smile...I'm grateful n I'm smiling now myself! lol appreciate the support always :)
Anonymous
12th Nov 2017 2:13pm
Damn bro...
words just don't quantify
my response to this..
words just don't quantify
my response to this..
12th Nov 2017 3:18pm
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12th Nov 2017 3:20pm
12th Nov 2017 9:53pm
How powerful, beautiful and unselfish love it is. My dear friend, I have been feeling your love since the very beginning I came to this place. It's you who always give support unconditionally......☺☺☺
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
12th Nov 2017 10:10pm
Anonymous
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12th Nov 2017 10:08pm
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12th Nov 2017 10:27pm
Well gosh you have Mr blushing my sweetness! Ur amazing urself n I'm truly grateful for your support always...
13th Nov 2017 00:42am
It's very beautiful.
A delicate, perfect love advise so innocent..
A dreamy love it sounds
-H-
A delicate, perfect love advise so innocent..
A dreamy love it sounds
-H-
13th Nov 2017 1:45am
Anonymous
13th Nov 2017 1:22am
Cuando tù amas estè verdadero 💖
13th Nov 2017 9:01am
Aaaawwww...yea, tru dat my dear...
Thank u so much, deeply grateful for the support...always mi Amiga :)
Thank u so much, deeply grateful for the support...always mi Amiga :)
13th Nov 2017 4:20am
13th Nov 2017 9:03am
Thank u Kas...very happy to hear you enjoyed, n truly appreciate your support :)
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Nov 2017 7:04am
13th Nov 2017 7:03am
Yeah ive been these very words in each literal phase
of their being in action.. extending beyond many
lessons and years witb a very few.
but i cannot deny how beautiful words are when written
of their being in action.. extending beyond many
lessons and years witb a very few.
but i cannot deny how beautiful words are when written
13th Nov 2017 9:05am
I'm sure many of us were n I'm positive we all can agree that's why we write...for the love of words....deeply, grateful for you my dear, always :)
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Nov 2017 9:14am
13th Nov 2017 9:12am
Then answer me this...
Why are we all deaf.. if we've all the same desired wells untouched beneath
our skin...singing loudly?
Passing each other by or unappreciative or simply
dont know this familiar calling taste?
Why are we all deaf.. if we've all the same desired wells untouched beneath
our skin...singing loudly?
Passing each other by or unappreciative or simply
dont know this familiar calling taste?
13th Nov 2017 10:11am
Sweetheart, I ask those same type of questions...u know for all the affection I feel here, in actual life, I'm largely ignored...as if I'm invisible or don't exist...
Sooooo when u find out, plz...tell me so I'd know too...
Sooooo when u find out, plz...tell me so I'd know too...
13th Nov 2017 2:33pm
13th Nov 2017 8:46pm
13th Nov 2017 10:02pm
13th Nov 2017 10:04pm
I thank you my friend, your support of my ink is greatly appreciated always... :)
9th Dec 2017 12:35pm
Wow this is a great poem, beautiful way to describe unselfish love! How it should be.
9th Dec 2017 12:40pm
Thank you, deeply grateful for ur thoughts n time n I agree with u, it is the way it should be... appreciate you...
