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Write Down Memory Lane
I rise with uneasiness, unsteadiness
Not sure where my path let alone my morning will take me
As the sun peeks through the gloom
I think of you
The poetic moon
Colliding with the stars of my universe
Riding my constellation as a wave of intrigue
Intellect dissected into quantum attraction
I grow scared
Want to run
From the energy that is pulling me so magnetically
Fear of Hurt
What am I doing
It feels so good to be wrong
Late nights orgasmic songs
I don't want to sing them alone
Forbidden doors are so tempting
Excuse me.....I'm just venting
Not sure where my path let alone my morning will take me
As the sun peeks through the gloom
I think of you
The poetic moon
Colliding with the stars of my universe
Riding my constellation as a wave of intrigue
Intellect dissected into quantum attraction
I grow scared
Want to run
From the energy that is pulling me so magnetically
Fear of Hurt
What am I doing
It feels so good to be wrong
Late nights orgasmic songs
I don't want to sing them alone
Forbidden doors are so tempting
Excuse me.....I'm just venting
Published 10th Nov 2017
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2017 1:58pm
You vent all you need to...it's a beautiful thing to witness. Always a pleasure to follow the trails your mind leaves behind on the page. Like a treasure hunt. Absolutely amazing.
10th Nov 2017 10:08pm
Your sizzling mic profile pick fits this piece well. The idea of relationships as song either sung solo or together is a compelling one. Brava!
11th Nov 2017 9:09pm
A very dazzling vent, the flow and imagery seem to just bleed from you, never forced, always unique. Great pen.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
Anonymous
11th Nov 2017 10:07pm
Exquisite...from the title on down
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21st Nov 2017 4:33pm
Wow on the richiously right! Nice write. Remember to vent without persecution is to breath with out smog or pollution. 😜
4th Aug 2018 6:24pm
5th Jan 2021 2:17am
This is very enlightening and beautifully written for its good to vent for its better to release out upon pen upon paper as it is OK to vent when one speaks out loud or to oneself for need to get a case over something that will surely past through time 💪👊 sometimes we have to be the grown up with maturity 🤔😎🙏
5th Jan 2021 8:04am
Indeed, and my self sessions definitely have no regulations to the trials of those cases. Thank you
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5th Jan 2021 8:04am
Indeed, and my self sessions definitely have no regulations to the trials of those cases. Thank you
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5th Jan 2021 12:41pm
