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Almas Afines......"Inside And Out" (a collaboration by Bonzi and MusicallyMrM)
What a fool believes,
his minds eye imagines
the rapture felt between
Can words even define what she feels, what she sees....
…..what a fool believes
When he slides in between
my soul shivers,
The first thrust wakes up
every molecule......
…...With every stroke
a pulse of energy erupts from my body
The blood rushes to my pussy
and my mind buzzes
no matter how wet,
the drops of ripened passion
flow steadily between
this union of souls,
the feeling's so
smooth......like blacque velvet going down slow
hot,
burnin'
scalding
our flesh
and the world fades,
only the sound of my heart remains
As the heat of the fire rises,
sparks dance across my skin
they settle on my abdomen
("I breath deep to take it all in....")
her pussy
grips hold of my throb
so damned tight
she bathes my carnal soul
in sensual delight....
….between the sounds
of love's train running,
hips thrusting
in polymorphic rhythm,
inside out
up and down
I am jaded, almost faded
whipped and white
my muscles constrict and tighten
fighting the feeling to clamp my thighs
I know when you’re ready
I feel you expand, pushing on the inside......
driving my piston,
…..filling her tender walls
her body, once soft
now rippling
muscular
and tight
nipples swollen against my lips
clitoris erect....
(...this man's most hedonistic delight)
…...building up the pressure
What once was a stream, now a roaring river
bodies pressed firmly together
attempting to find release
my cock
breeches her “sweetest taboo”
so damned deep,
so deliciously
swollen inside her
a sensual tide
rushing her shores
inside out,
“skin to skin”
our bodies kneaded, like bread
fresh dough rising
making and breaking each other
as if it were our “last supper”....
“My body releases...”
“....the billows rage”
“The fire extinguishes
and the world rushes back to my ears”
as we flow across
the waves
holding on to the rapture
as we lay
upon this pedestal of lust
I let out a breath and pray for it again....
…..moanin' sympathetically, her body calling me
beckoning
“fuck me....again”
what a fool believes
his minds eye imagines
the rapture
what she must feel
beyond surreal
can words even capture....
…..what a fool believes
written by Bonzi and MusicallyMrM....11/10/17
Published 10th Nov 2017
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....thanks so much to my Kindred sister, Bonzi for lending her own interpretation of "what a fool believes". The delicious "ins and outs" of this erotic patchouli. Beautiful work 💖
This was a fun project to do. I just lent my words, you are the one that gave them the wings. It turned out beautiful.
Anonymous
10th Nov 2017 9:27am
Thoroughly enjoyed this. Sweet words you two.
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
10th Nov 2017 5:48pm
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12th Nov 2017 3:50am
Being a witness to the first draft and the ultimate write, it was fascinating to see the molding of the two perspectives. I also appreciate the confidence to weave in and out of the patterned rhyme scheme. I am sure there is a more formal term for it.
Bravo to you both
Bravo to you both
