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rough rider
you had me
right from the start
with your fuck you poetics
& hard jaw
a rough rider
who lays it down mean
in & out of bed
bare knuckle brawler
whose arrogance
drew me in
& held me captive
with one stern look
you melt the whore
the ice queen
i am known for
in your presence
i become a trembling girl
to this day
i approach you with trepidation
with your cutting intellect
you intimidate
even the most formidable
i fall to my knees before you
& worship at your ego
that calls me
from the shadows
once again
i've been quietly
singing on your periphery
you pretended not to notice
but i know
you've been listening
& watching
we feed a need
in one another
fill a void
no other can
i am the vixen
you will always crave
you're the god of cock
whose passion
& will i am slave to
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Re. rough rider
Anonymous
7th Nov 2017 1:25am
Two halves feeding each other's needs. Intoxicating, my beautiful Dark Angel. Poetic intimacy at its finest. I do so love you
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13th Nov 2017 8:25am
Re. rough rider
7th Nov 2017 1:41am
I would’ve fallen to my knees and stroked his ego...lol
Definitely intense, hot
Love the pic as well
Definitely intense, hot
Love the pic as well
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Re: Re. rough rider
13th Nov 2017 8:25am
Re. rough rider
7th Nov 2017 2:58am
"whose arrogance
drew me in
& held me captive
with one stern look
you melt the whore
the ice queen
i am known for "
I really love such character you've created in this piece, and made such a beautiful love story within your works...
A royal ice queen, and a rough free-willed gangster is what I pictured....
such a dreamy work..!
-H-
drew me in
& held me captive
with one stern look
you melt the whore
the ice queen
i am known for "
I really love such character you've created in this piece, and made such a beautiful love story within your works...
A royal ice queen, and a rough free-willed gangster is what I pictured....
such a dreamy work..!
-H-
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Re: Re. rough rider
13th Nov 2017 8:27am
thank you beautiful poetess
i'm so pleased you were drawn in
by there seperate personas
& love for each other...
love Crim
i'm so pleased you were drawn in
by there seperate personas
& love for each other...
love Crim
Re. rough rider
7th Nov 2017 10:12am
Re: Re. rough rider
13th Nov 2017 8:27am
Re. rough rider
7th Nov 2017 11:02am
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13th Nov 2017 8:28am
Re. rough rider
7th Nov 2017 6:21pm
The rough rider would be thrilled by this. So many fine lines, but these are my favorites:
i've been quietly
singing on your periphery
you pretended not to notice
but i know
you've been listening
& watching
I suspect he was listening and watching you too. How could he not? Fine writing Lady Crim, as always.
i've been quietly
singing on your periphery
you pretended not to notice
but i know
you've been listening
& watching
I suspect he was listening and watching you too. How could he not? Fine writing Lady Crim, as always.
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Re: Re. rough rider
13th Nov 2017 8:29am
thank you dearest Sir Crow
I know he pays attention
even when he plays otherwise..
love Crim
I know he pays attention
even when he plays otherwise..
love Crim
Re. rough rider
Anonymous
8th Nov 2017 3:18am
My love, the power of such a man...i know it all too well (as you also know, ltm) and these lines are brilliant in their truths and tie this ink up perfectly!
"we feed a need
in one another
fill a void
no other can
i am the vixen
you will always crave
you're the god of cock
whose passion
& will i am slave to"
~ got me all sorts of tingly!
I love you fiercely
yours always & forever
Love Taryn xoxoxoxox
"we feed a need
in one another
fill a void
no other can
i am the vixen
you will always crave
you're the god of cock
whose passion
& will i am slave to"
~ got me all sorts of tingly!
I love you fiercely
yours always & forever
Love Taryn xoxoxoxox
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Re: Re. rough rider
13th Nov 2017 8:30am
thank you my love for understanding this need the way you do.. I'm so happy to have given you tingles..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
Re. rough rider
8th Nov 2017 6:18pm
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13th Nov 2017 8:31am
Re. rough rider
9th Nov 2017 00:18am
Hey! How did you manage to get that picture of me :-p (lol) - another fierce write from the mighty pen of Crimsin - loved it :-)
Huge massive hugs :-)
Huge massive hugs :-)
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Re: Re. rough rider
13th Nov 2017 8:32am
Re. rough rider
Anonymous
10th Nov 2017 9:33am
The rougher the rider
The better
Badass
The better
Badass
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Re: Re. rough rider
13th Nov 2017 8:32am
Anonymous
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12th Nov 2017 11:03pm
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Re: Re. rough rider
13th Nov 2017 8:33am
thank you beautiful one you made my night with the love you've shown me & this naughty write of mine..
love Crim
love Crim
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1st Dec 2017 5:43pm