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Choices Carry Deafening Voices
Denial holds onto a lesser life
Grasping the mind
Until you leave the world behind
In your own perfect ignorant bliss
A long lost lovers kiss
Evoking the emotions once shuttered
Behind the windows of your lost soul
How can you believe you are whole..
When you decide to bow unto mental imprisonment
Once again you say fate is the back you ride upon
But how do you now fate...
When the basis of your decisions have always been too late?
I wish you the best but I see you suffering
I'll never forget the lost look in your beautiful eyes
Deceived by all the evil lies
A choice is a voice that can deafen others
That reflect in your quickly drying tears..
You once again make yourself suffer
To go back to the one that makes you less than another
Grasping the mind
Until you leave the world behind
In your own perfect ignorant bliss
A long lost lovers kiss
Evoking the emotions once shuttered
Behind the windows of your lost soul
How can you believe you are whole..
When you decide to bow unto mental imprisonment
Once again you say fate is the back you ride upon
But how do you now fate...
When the basis of your decisions have always been too late?
I wish you the best but I see you suffering
I'll never forget the lost look in your beautiful eyes
Deceived by all the evil lies
A choice is a voice that can deafen others
That reflect in your quickly drying tears..
You once again make yourself suffer
To go back to the one that makes you less than another
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Re. Choices Carry Deafening Voices
6th Nov 2017 00:46am
This isn't what I meant when I said I wanted to write with you. To think I actually hoped we could be friends and tried to apologize. Sad right?
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6th Nov 2017 1:30am
Re: Re. Choices Carry Deafening Voices
6th Nov 2017 1:31am
And this is in no way attacking you. Its about being so lost in your own mind you can't see anything better than what you know. Its nothing to so with me at all. Its about YOU
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6th Nov 2017 1:36am
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6th Nov 2017 1:43am
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6th Nov 2017 1:57am
You're right. No one disputes that. And you told me totally opposite of what you said just now. You let me in. Pulled me into your soul. It was a little bit closer than arms length. But yea. I know what u mean. Better to suffer and know what to expect than to explore and take on better in life.
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Re. Choices Carry Deafening Voices
*clears throat* anyways back to this Beautiful piece. It says a lot about how sometimes you hope something works out, so you dont have to keep going down the same path over and over. Making the same mistakes repeatedly. You hurt yourself and sometimes others when you do that.
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6th Nov 2017 1:26pm
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6th Nov 2017 1:41pm
Thought I'd try and lighten up the comments a bit. I think ill modify my comment.
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6th Nov 2017 1:52pm
Re. Choices Carry Deafening Voices
6th Nov 2017 10:33pm