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Hypnocize Me
Run me ragged
Run me down
Run my big fat butt off
Until I drop to the ground
Make me tired
Make me sweat
Make me make a wish
Not to eat what I'll regret
Twist and turn me
Make me sway
Pump up my ego
I'll Do anything you say
First show me how
Give me a chance
Teach me a lesson
Then teach me how to dance
Bend and hurt me
Make me pay
Then when it's over
Hypnocize my pain away
*(12/14/1996)
Run me down
Run my big fat butt off
Until I drop to the ground
Make me tired
Make me sweat
Make me make a wish
Not to eat what I'll regret
Twist and turn me
Make me sway
Pump up my ego
I'll Do anything you say
First show me how
Give me a chance
Teach me a lesson
Then teach me how to dance
Bend and hurt me
Make me pay
Then when it's over
Hypnocize my pain away
*(12/14/1996)
Published 16th Sep 2011
| Edited 3rd Oct 2024
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16th Sep 2011 10:46pm
did you mean hynotize? or is this like hynotize and exorcise together..I'm curious..peace Crim
16th Sep 2011 11:01pm
It's a combination of hypnotize and exercise. I fell for my aerobics instructor, lol...
a side note, A guy who was selling some tapes on line several years ago threatened to sue me because he was using Hypnocise in the title of his program. I pointed out that I had written my poem 5 years before he came out with his tapes and there were one or two books published in the 70's using the word spelled with an S, where I spelled mine with a Z. I also had written an earlier poem from about 5 years before that spelling it with a S, though it wasn't as good as this one. He was claiming Trademark infringement, so I sent him a copy of the law as it is written and showed him why, even if he had been the first to use it, there was still no infringement on his trademark. It's complicated, but trademark and copyright laws are very specific and unless someone can show that they were financially injured, there isn't anything you can do even if it really were an infringement on the trademark. It's a crazy world!
a side note, A guy who was selling some tapes on line several years ago threatened to sue me because he was using Hypnocise in the title of his program. I pointed out that I had written my poem 5 years before he came out with his tapes and there were one or two books published in the 70's using the word spelled with an S, where I spelled mine with a Z. I also had written an earlier poem from about 5 years before that spelling it with a S, though it wasn't as good as this one. He was claiming Trademark infringement, so I sent him a copy of the law as it is written and showed him why, even if he had been the first to use it, there was still no infringement on his trademark. It's complicated, but trademark and copyright laws are very specific and unless someone can show that they were financially injured, there isn't anything you can do even if it really were an infringement on the trademark. It's a crazy world!
16th Sep 2011 11:04pm
ty for the heads up interesting combo..you fell in love with you exercise instructor.. :) sounds like she's hot..peace Crim
She still is hot, and we are still friends after all these years. I wrote that in 1996, she's 2 years younger than me. We even went to high school together for 2 years, but we didn't know each other then. She turned out to be married, then got divorced and I allowed myself to fall deeply in love with her. She found someone else and has since remarried, but I wrote her about 40 poems and was completely crushed when she told me she eloped with him. I rank that as the worst day of my life, and I have had several worst days of my life, but that one was absolute rock bottom. It wasn't her fault and as I said, we are now friends. She's the kind of woman, regardless of her hotness, that I would marry without a second thought. Her beauty runs from the flesh to her soul. Some feelings never die!
16th Sep 2011 11:20pm
you'll find the right lady and if you don't you'll prevail..I know you have a strong soul..she at least is a friend and inspires you..peace Crim :)
