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daisy chains
my mind seeks
the wildflower fields
where my soul takes shelter
i float there now
in my mind's eye
i see you
the most delicate beauty
on the rolling plains
your magical presence
awoke me this morning
taking me to a lovely place
where we lie in nature's haven
here my soul is free
to take flight
riding the cloud
of your life giving poetry
spilled from honeyed lips
into my quieted mind
i dream of brighter days
while you lead the way
guiding me back to nature
just with the whisper
of your loving essence
silently calling me
out of the desert
you crown my head
with daisy chains
& gently say it's okay lovely one
you're here
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Re. daisy chains
2nd Nov 2017 2:04pm
this is divinely beautiful Raven
"you crown my head
with daisy chains"
EXQUISITE!!
the imagery just floats
"you crown my head
with daisy chains"
EXQUISITE!!
the imagery just floats
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Re: Re. daisy chains
2nd Nov 2017 2:35pm
thank you dearest Soul Soldier i'm so pleased it came across as intended..
~Raven
~Raven
Re. daisy chains
2nd Nov 2017 2:46pm
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2nd Nov 2017 2:54pm
Re. daisy chains
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 2:55pm
Beautiful Raven... just beautiful <3
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2nd Nov 2017 3:09pm
Re. daisy chains
2nd Nov 2017 4:08pm
What a great opening....
my mind seeks
the wildflower fields
where my soul takes shelter
simply beautiful
my mind seeks
the wildflower fields
where my soul takes shelter
simply beautiful
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Re: Re. daisy chains
2nd Nov 2017 4:18pm
Re. daisy chains
2nd Nov 2017 6:06pm
So soothing and beautifully written! My favorite lines:
i float there now
in my mind's eye
i see you
the most delicate beauty
on the rolling plains
It's visionary in a gentle, graceful way. I like the pic too. I think it comes from "Valerie and her Week of Wonders," a gorgeous Czech film.
i float there now
in my mind's eye
i see you
the most delicate beauty
on the rolling plains
It's visionary in a gentle, graceful way. I like the pic too. I think it comes from "Valerie and her Week of Wonders," a gorgeous Czech film.
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Re: Re. daisy chains
2nd Nov 2017 10:02pm
thank you dearest poet most graciously i'm so happy it moved you in such a way.. i've not seen the movie but I do love the picture..
~Raven
~Raven
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 7:20pm
Thank you beautiful. This was written so well, I could feel you speaking to me Raven.
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Re: Re. daisy chains
2nd Nov 2017 10:03pm
thank you beautiful Lady i'm so happy this spoke directly to your heart.. I deeply cherish your thoughts & visits..
~Raven
~Raven
Re. daisy chains
3rd Nov 2017 8:21pm
this is really beautiful and unexpected - I like how you do that thing of writing in such different genres. I really enjoyed this a lot :-)))))))
excellent write - Loved it :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
excellent write - Loved it :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. daisy chains
4th Nov 2017 10:56pm
thank you dearest poet yes on this day I was in need of nature & calm.. the presence of all you beautiful poets took me there..
~Raven
~Raven
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3rd Nov 2017 9:01pm
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4th Nov 2017 10:57pm
thank you beautiful Teri i'm so happy the calm of this write affected you the way it did me writing it..
~Raven
~Raven
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 00:05am
Raven.. such brilliance, and divine inking.. really loved this.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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4th Nov 2017 10:58pm
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 00:14am
Raven, such a peaceful and tranquil place your muse takes you to...I hope they are with you every morning when you wake and have those brighter days with you always. Beautiful ink.
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. daisy chains
4th Nov 2017 11:00pm
thank you graciously beautiful poetess yes I was feeling down..then sitting among the poets here I was transported to nature.. i'm happy your felt the tranquility of this write..
~Raven
~Raven
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 6:06am
So beautiful, so peaceful.
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4th Nov 2017 11:00pm
Re. daisy chains
5th Nov 2017 8:41pm
I feel embraced by the flowers of this wistful wildflower-garden community :) You’ve scented my day with great rays of sunshine, how I bask in the warmth of your woven daisy-chains <3
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Re: Re. daisy chains
5th Nov 2017 8:51pm
thank you beautiful poetess i'm happy you felt my garden's embrace in this write :)
~Raven
~Raven