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poetic soul soldiers
the light
that shines within
is known
with every utterance
it's tasted
& tried
to see if it's fruit
ripened on the vine
of wisdom
for if it be true
from far & wide
the masses will come
to sample your beauty
caress every word
until it shines bright
with nuance & shade
let your lips spill honey
brought forth
from the divinity
you have wrought
from a source
of both pleasure & pain
let your poems
be soul soldiers
lighting the way
for a bereft world
let's march poets
it's a brand new day
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Re. poetic soul soldiers
Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 4:19pm
thank you beautiful poetess
I am inspired daily
by all of you lovely poets..
~Raven
I am inspired daily
by all of you lovely poets..
~Raven
Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 4:38pm
Poetry like this cries to be heard...
Thank you for sharing with all of us this beautiful gift of yours...
Eru
Thank you for sharing with all of us this beautiful gift of yours...
Eru
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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 4:42pm
Re. poetic soul soldiers
Anonymous
27th Oct 2017 4:49pm
this is so lovely..
just all around lovely
i salute you
Soul Soldier
just all around lovely
i salute you
Soul Soldier

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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 4:56pm
thank you dearest poet
you know you in part inspired this
with the way you write..
lifting people up
& shouting truth
that's why I call you Soul Soldier..
in the writing of this
I realize we are all called to this
beautiful poetic mission..
so I salute back with a smile :)
~Raven
you know you in part inspired this
with the way you write..
lifting people up
& shouting truth
that's why I call you Soul Soldier..
in the writing of this
I realize we are all called to this
beautiful poetic mission..
so I salute back with a smile :)
~Raven
Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 4:58pm
... and then poetry subverts myths and lies, brings in question rumors of earth and skies, forces us to look ourselves straight in eyes and on occasion eavesdrops and warns of what is fast approaching...
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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 5:05pm
you are a very wise man dearest poet
to say more would give it all away eh?
thank you..
~Raven
to say more would give it all away eh?
thank you..
~Raven
Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 5:47pm
There are great images with this one. I like the concept of how one feels when reading poetry. Starting with the anticipation of gaining such enlightenment from words as if nector from some divine fruit. I found the slight twist interesting of how poems are like soldiers in every poets army. It's a interesting image and I never thought about it that way. I really enjoyed this one.
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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
thank you dearest poet I'm so happy you found my metaphors interesting & unique I believe at times we tap into divine inspiration it's at times when I do I can't take full credit for an idea because it was no train of thought that led me here.. it was as if it appeared from nowhere..like it was revealed to me..now that it has been I too love the idea of our poems being soul soldiers in our poetic army..
I deeply appreciate your thoughts..
~Raven
I deeply appreciate your thoughts..
~Raven
Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 8:31pm
Yes, like Soul Soldiers in an army of flowing ink, and if I had the rank, I'd give you a field commission for this poem.
Well done Capt.
Well done Capt.
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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
2nd Nov 2017 3:06am
thank you beautiful Teri you made me smile big with your comment :)
I love that we stand together in this poetic army..
~Raven
I love that we stand together in this poetic army..
~Raven
Re. poetic soul soldiers
27th Oct 2017 10:44pm
Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
2nd Nov 2017 3:06am
Re. poetic soul soldiers
28th Oct 2017 1:36am
I am happy to be a private in this army of the ink - this is such a wow poem :-)
Huge, Huge Like :-)
Huge, Huge Like :-)
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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
2nd Nov 2017 3:07am
aw dearest poet you are a high ranking official in this poetic army..
your pen wields much power..
~Raven
your pen wields much power..
~Raven
Re. poetic soul soldiers
Anonymous
28th Oct 2017 5:00am
Raven.. love the depth of your words.. and the rhythmic flow.. your style reminds me of me.. short and sweet.. much respect..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
2nd Nov 2017 3:08am
thank you dearest poet that I would remind you of your own poetic pen is a real honor..
~Raven
~Raven
Re. poetic soul soldiers
28th Oct 2017 7:01pm
Such eloquence despite the brevity of your lines! Poems could go in to do battle or keep the peace, all depending. My favorite lines:
let your lips spill honey
brought forth
from the divinity
you have wrought
from a source
of both pleasure & pain
Beautiful work, both pleasure and pain considered.
let your lips spill honey
brought forth
from the divinity
you have wrought
from a source
of both pleasure & pain
Beautiful work, both pleasure and pain considered.
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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
2nd Nov 2017 3:09am
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Re: Re. poetic soul soldiers
2nd Nov 2017 3:10am
thank you beautiful poetess yes exactly that I love your vision :)
~Raven
~Raven
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