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Re. Love is not for me.
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2017 4:38pm
In reading this painful piece, I feel as though love is deeper for you than for Love. The balance is off between the two. And you deserve equality, understanding and honesty. If Love were true, your love would never be used against you. Such a aching beautiful poem
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Re: Re. Love is not for me.
22nd Oct 2017 4:55pm
Thank you for your thoughts on this. I need to hear it, because the emotional pain is messing with my sense of self. You are right. I cried while penning this. I haven't cried so much in a very long time. In essence, this piece is my tears, if tears had a voice. Thank you xo
Re. Love is not for me.
22nd Oct 2017 6:29pm
very deep ,thanks for sharing SweetPurgatory,well penned poem and feelings pushing through this piece.
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Re. Love is not for me.
5th Nov 2017 7:22am
It has a straight forward quality that lends and earnest and evocative quality I admired. Enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. Love is not for me.
5th Nov 2017 10:41am
Thank you for your feedback on this. Sometimes, I don't want to sugarcoat my feelings, I want it to flow as it is for me, in that moment. Oftentimes, it can sound a bit abrasive to some, but there is my truth flowing in every piece I write, whether for me, or for others.
Re. Love is not for me.
5th Nov 2017 10:46am
from your soul & heart
wrought from deep pain
a very beautiful heart-wrenching write..
~Raven
wrought from deep pain
a very beautiful heart-wrenching write..
~Raven
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Re. Love is not for me.
7th Sep 2020 10:05am
This one touched me deeply, for I only know how to love one way, wholly and completely. But for many people this is too much for them to handle. It is beyond their comprehension, the commitment that I have. I think maybe you love the same way and it was more than Love could handle. I hate the callous, unintentional way Love hurts, simply by not being able to understand me at all.
This says it all.
Thank you for the write.
This says it all.
Thank you for the write.
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Re: Re. Love is not for me.
7th Sep 2020 12:29pm
Yes, that is how I love... I don't open my heart easily, but when it's opened, it loves in edifying, freeing ways. My love isn't understood or accepted by many.
Thank you for your thoughts on this one. I was crying so much when I wrote it.
Thank you for your thoughts on this one. I was crying so much when I wrote it.