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Your Music Lives Forever
Your music never dies
and I tell you this is why
even when your tears may glisten
or in times you do not listen
Life can bring a early death
even though you're still with breath
It is your song that you will make
wrote in notes that they will take
they the children of your loin
they the children you enjoin
they should pen your lyrics
they should be your beat
in this joyous thing called life
they should move your feet
my friend your beat goes on
even though you may be gone
it's carried forth by those you've left
those who love you past your death
heard by those which you have raised
and by those who reaped your praise
even though life may change keys
and at times you're on your knees
just bow your head and stop to pray
and not again you'll feel to say
"The day the music died"
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Re. Your Music Lives Forever
beautiful Teri your soul shines in this write
each of us carries a song within us
what a wonderful way of seeing this unique soul music..
I love this :)
~Raven
each of us carries a song within us
what a wonderful way of seeing this unique soul music..
I love this :)
~Raven
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Re: Re. Your Music Lives Forever
You are very insightful dear Raven. Yes, it is our music which derives from our soul that we pass forward to those around us, and it is up to us to determine how it is composed, perhaps an upbeat jazz tune, a waltz, or opera, even a melancholy ballad, however we choose to be remembered.
Thank you Raven, and I know you will choose wisely my friend.
Thank you Raven, and I know you will choose wisely my friend.
Re. Your Music Lives Forever
19th Oct 2017 1:49am
Very delicately written..! Very spiritual.. I love how you have used "music" as how it shows our different genre of our souls as music-
just like how our personality is shown by the type of music we listen to!
Love the bits and pieces of rhyme too! The details...
great work :)
just like how our personality is shown by the type of music we listen to!
Love the bits and pieces of rhyme too! The details...
great work :)
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Re. Your Music Lives Forever
I truly believe that each of us has a choice in who we are now, who we will become and how we will be remembered. No matter what your beliefs, be it a higher power of your choosing or through the evolution of time. However we have acquired this gift, it can never be taken from us, only given over.
Thank You for the wonderful words you have bestowed upon me. It is truly appreciated.
Teri
Thank You for the wonderful words you have bestowed upon me. It is truly appreciated.
Teri
Re. Your Music Lives Forever
19th Oct 2017 11:09am
I'd like to think my music, is eclectic enough to move many feet, but don't no
one try n laugh at my two left feet lol...
Ur ink was inspiring n sweet my friend. :)
one try n laugh at my two left feet lol...
Ur ink was inspiring n sweet my friend. :)
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Re: Re. Your Music Lives Forever
19th Oct 2017 5:57pm
I have heard your music Poe, on many occasion I have danced to it and on others just sat back and enjoyed your melody. You my friend, are a shining composer. As always Poe.
Re. Your Music Lives Forever
19th Oct 2017 1:36pm
what
pleasant surprise!
in fact a gift daer Friend!
inspiring indeed.
Motivational beyond the words, for it moves,
the reader. And in some good ways.
cold storage will go into meltdown
with this warm addition.
hear the applause??
pleasant surprise!
in fact a gift daer Friend!
inspiring indeed.
Motivational beyond the words, for it moves,
the reader. And in some good ways.
cold storage will go into meltdown
with this warm addition.
hear the applause??
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Re: Re. Your Music Lives Forever
19th Oct 2017 6:06pm
You have bathed me with a symphony of kind words my friend. I am awash in your glow.
Thank You C_F
Thank You C_F
Re. Your Music Lives Forever
21st Oct 2017 10:26pm
beautiful Teri so much delightful wisdom in you
I always learn from you
this is wonderful..
yes our music goes on..
love Crim
I always learn from you
this is wonderful..
yes our music goes on..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Your Music Lives Forever
Thank you for the kind words. The wisdom you speak of is not new, only gathered from years of listening to others and then as a conduit, passed on for new ears and minds to heed, enjoy and learn from as I did. I only ask that those that read these words if they are so inclined, to again move them onward.
Again thank you for the visit and comment.
Teri
Again thank you for the visit and comment.
Teri
Re. Your Music Lives Forever
22nd Oct 2017 9:32pm
some great wisdom here and it's a beautifully crafted poem - there are some things I would disagree with but then that's just life :-)
Really loved this :-)
Really loved this :-)
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Re: Re. Your Music Lives Forever
22nd Oct 2017 9:52pm
David, that's what makes our friendship special. We'll always have something worthwhile to discuss and disagree on.
Luv you my man and thank you for being a honest friend, for those are the ones to trust most.
Luv you my man and thank you for being a honest friend, for those are the ones to trust most.
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