deepundergroundpoetry.com
Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
(i) Freedom
Life is strange
Freedom fighters
Appear to only fight
For their freedom
To oppress others
Rights to
Freedom
(ii) Let’s See
Do you think
You have
Freedom of
Speech and
Expression?
Try calling
Me a cunt
And we’ll
Just see
(iii) Killing
Guns do not kill people
People with guns
Kill people as they do
With kitchen knives
White Vans and trucks
Fast cars, golf clubs
Baseball bats hatchets
Claw hammers, Cues
Nail guns, ice picks
Machettes, cheese wire
Bicycle chains, chisels
Alcohol, cigarettes
And of course
Killing with kindness
Maybe we should
Ban them all
Especially Kindness
(iv) Weapon
I had an automatic weapon
Always loaded
Ready to fire
Usually on target
I'd sometimes miss
But I handled it well
I am almost an expert
My faithful automatic
weapon
Is what I call
My Penis
(v) Windows
Your eyes are
The windows
To your soul, so
If you cant see
Through your
Own bullshit
Then you need to
Wash your
Fuckin windows
(vi) Lost
Losing yourself is easy
Finding your self is hard
Requiring you to get off
Your knees and fight back
Remaining on your knees
Means you will remain
Forever lost
(vii) Missing
Without honesty
Commitment
Compromise
And hard work
All love
Is fleeting
Authors note: (iv) Weapon is now a lie, not even viagra could help :-)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 9
reading list entries 0
comments 18
reads 637
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
16th Oct 2017 7:11pm
Your philosophy is so freaking funny David. Even the lies, maybe especially so! Laughed hysterically all the way through, maybe because it's all so very true!
JJ
JJ
1
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 3:44am
I am tempted to form my own religion but then I would be just as bad as them (lol) thank you my friend :-)
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 4:05am
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 8:09pm
THE JOB IS YOURS AS LONG AS i GET THE USUAL 51% FEE :-)))))))))))))))))))
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
Anonymous
16th Oct 2017 7:33pm
I think I strained my neck nodding in agreement and giggling at these. Keep preaching, David, I'm enjoying the words of wisdom! Huge hugs! :)
0
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 3:51am
can't avoid the humour (lol) have to mix it with the serious :-) glad you liked it and it made you smile :-) Huge Hugs :-)
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
16th Oct 2017 11:47pm
Well Well what do we have here?! . . .a freedom of speech reference! :D
David, you have so much wisdom to share with others, but more importantly than that, you have a unique perspective that encompasses both humor and a serious dose of thought-provoking verse.
Thank you for sharing.
David, you have so much wisdom to share with others, but more importantly than that, you have a unique perspective that encompasses both humor and a serious dose of thought-provoking verse.
Thank you for sharing.
0
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 3:53am
it's funny, when I wrote this I could get you out of my head (lol) thank you again for the inspiration to write freedom and your inspirational comments :-)))))))))
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 1:32am
Maybe pulling your weapon does no good any more, but never quit pulling your punches.
Humorous and serious all rolled into one. Another great write.
Humorous and serious all rolled into one. Another great write.
1
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 3:55am
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 3:45am
This is so fierce, I love it:
' Your eyes are
The windows
To your soul, so
If you cant see
Through your
Own bullshit
Then you need to
Wash your
Fuckin windows '
Also, kindness as a weapon is an amazing concept to ponder...
' Your eyes are
The windows
To your soul, so
If you cant see
Through your
Own bullshit
Then you need to
Wash your
Fuckin windows '
Also, kindness as a weapon is an amazing concept to ponder...
1
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 3:57am
thank you very much for your read and your comments - sometimes fierce is the only way to go - I really don't think we can ban kindness if anything we need more :-))))
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
Anonymous
17th Oct 2017 5:40pm
TRUTH !
0
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 8:07pm
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
17th Oct 2017 8:26pm
"(v) Windows
Your eyes are
The windows
To your soul, so
If you cant see
Through your
Own bullshit
Then you need to
Wash your
Fuckin windows"
damn it David this write
is clever as hell
& on point
you always deliver my friend..
love & hugs..
Brenda
Your eyes are
The windows
To your soul, so
If you cant see
Through your
Own bullshit
Then you need to
Wash your
Fuckin windows"
damn it David this write
is clever as hell
& on point
you always deliver my friend..
love & hugs..
Brenda
0
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
20th Oct 2017 3:40am
thank you so much sweet Brenda for the read and your kind comments and of course the love and hugs :-))))))))) warm highlander hugs coming your way :-)
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
18th Oct 2017 1:13am
This write is amazing..! So true as others had said here...
Very indpirational with a touch of humor and all the right amount of great thoughts..
"Losing yourself is easy
Finding your self is hard
Requiring you to get off
Your knees and fight back
Remaining on your knees
Means you will remain
Forever lost "
Yes..! I have noticed it myself as well! Losing self-esteem with all these pessimistic thoughys pondering in my head brings continuous doubts of self, and get locked in the pit of self-pity!
Very very inspiring..
Very indpirational with a touch of humor and all the right amount of great thoughts..
"Losing yourself is easy
Finding your self is hard
Requiring you to get off
Your knees and fight back
Remaining on your knees
Means you will remain
Forever lost "
Yes..! I have noticed it myself as well! Losing self-esteem with all these pessimistic thoughys pondering in my head brings continuous doubts of self, and get locked in the pit of self-pity!
Very very inspiring..
0
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom? 7.2
20th Oct 2017 3:42am
I am so glad you enjoyed them and got some inspiration - for me some of them have to be tempered with humour :-) thank you :-))))))))))))))))))))))