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when the vultures buried their dead
vultures
only see food
dead-meat?
no
that is the imperfect
definition by humans
so
when it's time
to eat
vultures
only see
meat
their own
or not
let rot
they not
fear
the times
when flood
famines
or earthquakes
are not scary anymore
the time
when vultures
buried their dead
Author's note:- scenario, metaphorical- vultures burying their dead, for the entire food chain will become too toxic even for the nature's hardiest of cleansers- the vultures.
Published 16th Oct 2017
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16th Oct 2017 6:44pm
Very nice environmental observation, a stark warning indeed, wonderful use of “nature’s hardiest of cleansers” to cement the impact such a world would be like.
peer's
understanding
insight
is but a delight.
welcome is the peer
with the sight
vision
both
appreciated
immensely.
understanding
insight
is but a delight.
welcome is the peer
with the sight
vision
both
appreciated
immensely.
16th Oct 2017 11:00pm
Damn I like this ink CF...all the interconnectedness...the poison...
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
17th Oct 2017 1:12pm
welcome
is the peer
esteemed
as well as
the review
both
appreciated
deeply.
is the peer
esteemed
as well as
the review
both
appreciated
deeply.
17th Oct 2017 00:15am
Great piece, the keen observation is quite astounding. Another thought provoker.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
observe
is all we can do
dear poet.
welcome your support
and
appreciate it
deeply.
is all we can do
dear poet.
welcome your support
and
appreciate it
deeply.
17th Oct 2017 2:27am
Totally, yes... dude.. you are whack wonderful. Detritus... mushrooms... phoenix rising from negreto... kill me.... crush me with your brilliance... i love you, i hate you... shine on you crazy diamond
17th Oct 2017 1:16pm
haha!
wonderful
is the multi-talented peer
well
no words
to repay the appreciation.
welcome
dear peer!
wonderful
is the multi-talented peer
well
no words
to repay the appreciation.
welcome
dear peer!
17th Oct 2017 2:13pm
"fear the times when floods, famines or earthquakes are not scary anymore" I see these times in our near future and birds of prey and vultures alike resting in the trees. It is best we heed the signs and begin kicking our minds into gear.
The words here, both figurative and literally well written and are a forewarning to us all.
The words here, both figurative and literally well written and are a forewarning to us all.
17th Oct 2017 4:01pm
Friend
with depth
of insight
wisdom
is but a joy to behold.
Floods
famines
earthquakes
when they'll become the norm
life still won't be 'that' scary
for these
with bit of human ingenuity and wisdom
are manageable/planned for
what is truly
scary
is the inability
of the human
to "manage"
the food chain
in its entirety.
too late
for the fool
sitting on the other end of the branch
with a chainsaw in his hand
Appreciation
beyond words.
with depth
of insight
wisdom
is but a joy to behold.
Floods
famines
earthquakes
when they'll become the norm
life still won't be 'that' scary
for these
with bit of human ingenuity and wisdom
are manageable/planned for
what is truly
scary
is the inability
of the human
to "manage"
the food chain
in its entirety.
too late
for the fool
sitting on the other end of the branch
with a chainsaw in his hand
Appreciation
beyond words.
17th Oct 2017 5:41pm
Often I ponder "Is man at the top of the food chain?" and I think only man would feel so, with his "Me first" narcissistic thinking. Since man must depend on all else, in order to continue. Perhaps he has turned the food chain on it's head. Just me?
17th Oct 2017 6:12pm
it's a very interesting observation dear Friend. And yep, me-first narcissist thinking. The food chain sometimes also referred as 'the balance of nature' of course is something beyond human control. But hey, 'i got this- i got this' attitude fool normally realises he ain't got this till it is too late. Till then..drill baby drill..fracking, belching- no they're tree huggers' conspiracy theories.
