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Re. Darkness
15th Oct 2017 2:42pm
Beautiful composition. Reminds me of a fallen snag in the forest who continues to sustain her surroundings through death.
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15th Oct 2017 3:00pm
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16th Oct 2017 9:11am
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17th Oct 2017 2:17am
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16th Oct 2017 9:44am
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17th Oct 2017 2:17am
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16th Oct 2017 11:32pm
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17th Oct 2017 2:19am
Thank you. I am meager. Hung over. Concussed. I am going to vomit now, but I will return
Re. Darkness
17th Oct 2017 3:44am
So sorry to have read this, I hope it's just temporary. Find something positive and build on it, for I have seen your ability.
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Re. Darkness
17th Oct 2017 4:23am
My dear friend, I am not ready to see you die, so breathe properly and live cheerfully. I will see you tomorrow and the day after tomorrow......
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
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17th Oct 2017 5:30am
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17th Oct 2017 6:26am
Well, i don't think my place is better than yours, but i try to enjoy it.... RiseJasmine
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17th Oct 2017 6:29am
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2017 9:17am
A profound write...
Hope things get better for you soon
Hope things get better for you soon
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Re: Re. Darkness
18th Oct 2017 4:50am
Thanks. The storm has passed, the alcohol gone, and I somehow made it in to work.... probably not wise