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Imagination
As the mornings grow colder
The seasons unfold
Autumn is coming
But we never grow old
A full moon is rising
Now the waxing, now wane
Then the new moon greets us
We are children again
The star canopy delights us
Hidden fireflies excite
Running through the forest
Dreaming together tonight
The sun rise tomorrow
In the cool autumn breeze
Will fill our minds again
And plant a new seed
Finding hidden paths
We navigate the way
Holding hand in hand
To the myth of old age
The seasons unfold
Autumn is coming
But we never grow old
A full moon is rising
Now the waxing, now wane
Then the new moon greets us
We are children again
The star canopy delights us
Hidden fireflies excite
Running through the forest
Dreaming together tonight
The sun rise tomorrow
In the cool autumn breeze
Will fill our minds again
And plant a new seed
Finding hidden paths
We navigate the way
Holding hand in hand
To the myth of old age
Published 11th Oct 2017
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lovely Nightbird this write is magical
transporting me to this place
with the words you weave..
love Crim
transporting me to this place
with the words you weave..
love Crim
11th Oct 2017 6:05pm
M’lady I’m glad to have shared with you such a magical place :) The innocence of young love!
11th Oct 2017 7:19pm
Beautiful sing-song piece! I can see this poised in some Garth Williams illustrations or something. It's got an old-timey feel about it.
Thanks AtoMik :) and wow you’re right, his art would perfectly suite this piece!
Ty also for the RL add :)
Ty also for the RL add :)
11th Oct 2017 8:49pm
Very sweet and now I feel as though a cool breeze of late autumn has hit me..!
11th Oct 2017 9:40pm
12th Oct 2017 5:31pm
you've managed to change my view of Autumn - I always associated it with death and dying - you certainly give it a beautiful perspective :-)
Big Massive LIKE! :-)
Big Massive LIKE! :-)
12th Oct 2017 5:39pm
16th Oct 2017 2:56pm
This flows so well with simplicity and stylish rhyme.
"The star canopy delights us
Hidden fireflies excite"
well written lines, keep'em coming.
"The star canopy delights us
Hidden fireflies excite"
well written lines, keep'em coming.
16th Oct 2017 3:12pm
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