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The One
I am David Macleod
Of the clan Macleod
And I am damaged
There can be only One
I am the one
I am the only one
I am the one and only
There can be no other
Have no one before me
I am my own salvation
I am your salvation
I am his salvation
Vengeance will be Mine
The only way to my father
Is with a hatchet through
His ribcage into to his heart
His blood now shed
By me and for me
His body broken for you
Broken for me
His death assured
No resurrection
I am the Lamb
His was the
Blood of the Lamb
Spilled by me
Righteously
Published 10th Oct 2017
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10th Oct 2017 5:04pm
the idea of being immortal fills me with dread (lol) glad it stirred your interest - thank you :-)
10th Oct 2017 2:24am
dearest poet I absolutely love this
I can hear your warrior cry in this write..
~Raven
I can hear your warrior cry in this write..
~Raven
10th Oct 2017 5:19pm
war cry and war face painted blue a truly scary sight :-) thank you for your comments - means a lot ;-)
10th Oct 2017 3:39am
David, you are the One and Only One for sure. Strong write, good for you man.
10th Oct 2017 5:20pm
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10th Oct 2017 2:01pm
There is a primordial quality to these words that evokes an image of you defiant in the wind, tartan blowing, head tipped back to the sky. Love the strength in this one. You are The Macleod! Fierce hugs :)
10th Oct 2017 5:22pm
tartan blowing? Heyyy!!!! stop trying to look up my kilt (lmao) thank you for your unwavering support - massive hugs :-)
10th Oct 2017 5:52pm
Aaahhh..putting a wee bit of a spin on the holy book again...are ya now?? ( giggles) #salvationinaccordancetothewordofmacloud ;)
But in all seriousness....this one is penned with an amazing amount inner-strength--an intense, and relentless spirit....an energy that it is immortal!! Indeed--YOU are the one, and only David of the clan Macleoud--bold and barbarous....to be sure--a powerful warrior to be reckoned with!!
Mo Chara chotha`imid...This piece leaves me feeling as if, thru this writing, you were able to face-down a demon that has tormented you for your entire life! And...if this has is the case, i am smiling with eyes full of tears...my heart so glad for you
...as i send you bunches, and bunches tight, comforting hugs!
Sl`ainte!!!!
But in all seriousness....this one is penned with an amazing amount inner-strength--an intense, and relentless spirit....an energy that it is immortal!! Indeed--YOU are the one, and only David of the clan Macleoud--bold and barbarous....to be sure--a powerful warrior to be reckoned with!!
Mo Chara chotha`imid...This piece leaves me feeling as if, thru this writing, you were able to face-down a demon that has tormented you for your entire life! And...if this has is the case, i am smiling with eyes full of tears...my heart so glad for you
...as i send you bunches, and bunches tight, comforting hugs!
Sl`ainte!!!!
11th Oct 2017 2:31am
My only regret is that it was all in my head :-( I love bunches - sending you warm kilted hugs :-)
