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maybe just may be
maybe she has gone to sleep
maybe it is time; go deep
find
the meaning of love
of living up to it
for it is not easy
to do anything else
but living for her sake
whilst she is awake
Published 9th Oct 2017
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9th Oct 2017 8:00pm
10th Oct 2017 1:33pm
adorable indeed is the one
for whom i wrote this.
my princess now one and a half year old.
deep appreciation
for the peer
and the compliment.
CF
for whom i wrote this.
my princess now one and a half year old.
deep appreciation
for the peer
and the compliment.
CF
10th Oct 2017 5:37am
I believe you have already found the true nature of the object sought here, for it appears like a gentle rain from the poetry you splash upon your page.
And like the above comment, the last stanza is a nourishing puddle, left to be absorbed by the reader.
And like the above comment, the last stanza is a nourishing puddle, left to be absorbed by the reader.
with peers
admirable
generous
life is but a dream.
and with the one for whom it is written - my baby daughter, every moment is but a dream. Like any other parent, it is not possible to think of anything whilst relishing the joy they bring- hence the poem, concieved whilst putting her
to bed.
appreciation.
deep.
admirable
generous
life is but a dream.
and with the one for whom it is written - my baby daughter, every moment is but a dream. Like any other parent, it is not possible to think of anything whilst relishing the joy they bring- hence the poem, concieved whilst putting her
to bed.
appreciation.
deep.
