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Life... is beautiful
"life pulls me away
had to leave"
she said
i say
life is beautiful
she sums up
in few words
what takes me
a page
perhaps longer
i am the cold
of the cement cube
cold to the touch
too hard to absorb
or meld with anything
whilst
she
the epitome
of
fusion of life
of experience
of peaks in joys
and sorrows
of
resilience
under rain
under strain
and
cloudbursts
of calamities
she highlights
the silver lining
around the darkest
of grey clouds
called
life
i have no choice
no option
but to agree
[that indeed]
life
is beautiful.
Published 8th Oct 2017
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8th Oct 2017 2:35am
Life is indeed beautiful
This poem mirrors that same beauty,
but the reflection radiated outward here is of her.
The poet is much blessed as is she.
This poem mirrors that same beauty,
but the reflection radiated outward here is of her.
The poet is much blessed as is she.
8th Oct 2017 3:09am
Without a doubt, it is!
peer
with appreciation
affection
and review with a
glow
are welcome
wholeheartedly.
appreciation of
both
held deep.
close.
peer
with appreciation
affection
and review with a
glow
are welcome
wholeheartedly.
appreciation of
both
held deep.
close.
8th Oct 2017 5:30am
Life, even in the darkest times is beautiful. Always eye opening to read your poetry.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
it
truly is
shades of dark
and light come
go.
Peer,
visit
appreciation.
Deeply
held close.
truly is
shades of dark
and light come
go.
Peer,
visit
appreciation.
Deeply
held close.
8th Oct 2017 8:49am
when you look at children we feel like this - and your poem catches this - they do not fear the future or feel ashamed of the past
9th Oct 2017 10:11am
True.
Very True.
The review
is but a beautiful
truth.
Visit
is an honor
review
is invaluable.
Appreciation
of all
held deep
and close!
Very True.
The review
is but a beautiful
truth.
Visit
is an honor
review
is invaluable.
Appreciation
of all
held deep
and close!
