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Bon Voyage!
I’ll throw
flying fucks
in your face;
don’t want
your embrace!
Get away!
Or stay, tamed-
no preference,
just the same.
[….]
Hey, what’s that?
Over there?
No, there!
Stand tall,
look straight!
Do you see
o’er the gate?
Fresher bales
of weed
or greener bud?
No, me either.
Now what’s that
under-toe?
Oh, the road
that you chose?
Hmmm…
Now reaping
what you sowed;
was all a show.
Not sure
where to go?
Lost?
Find a map!
I’ll be along
for the drag-
Point your finger,
give me charm!
There’s no harm-
drive away!
[….]
By the way,
think I’ll stay
after all…
Too late now
for you to complain!
See ya later!
Au revoir~
Better days!!
flying fucks
in your face;
don’t want
your embrace!
Get away!
Or stay, tamed-
no preference,
just the same.
[….]
Hey, what’s that?
Over there?
No, there!
Stand tall,
look straight!
Do you see
o’er the gate?
Fresher bales
of weed
or greener bud?
No, me either.
Now what’s that
under-toe?
Oh, the road
that you chose?
Hmmm…
Now reaping
what you sowed;
was all a show.
Not sure
where to go?
Lost?
Find a map!
I’ll be along
for the drag-
Point your finger,
give me charm!
There’s no harm-
drive away!
[….]
By the way,
think I’ll stay
after all…
Too late now
for you to complain!
See ya later!
Au revoir~
Better days!!
Published 8th Oct 2017
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8th Oct 2017 3:14am
another excellent poem - it has a real strong beat this would again be perfect for performance and performance is difficult to write for - at least three of your poems so far would definitely work really well performed :-)
the first stanza is fierce and my favourite :-)))
the first stanza is fierce and my favourite :-)))
Yes! I've been feeling with each new write a certain vibe, a depiction of scene expressed through tone and inflection. With -Bon Voyage- in particular, with every small edit I kept feeling more-so compelled to perform the expression! I might muster the courage to record said performance someday :) Thank you for your experienced observation David!
There is a certain charge to that first verse...
There is a certain charge to that first verse...
8th Oct 2017 6:43pm
I used to perform my poetry in Edinburgh they have lots of poetry bars and clubs - strangely after my first amputation I lost my nerve and haven't done it since - but I know a good performance piece when I see it :-)
8th Oct 2017 7:20pm
I appreciate you're ever-honest and modest remarks my friend <3 Many hugs!
8th Oct 2017 8:21am
What's that under toe? U mean the two Riggs laying on the floor? The ones I asked to break the needle off. Should've just asked, they are used to shoot lube up my ass!! is that clear enough?
Thanks I can hear you laughing!
. that was funny.....
Just a little humor
Was feeling kinda crass
. that was funny.....
Just a little humor
Was feeling kinda crass
8th Oct 2017 2:15pm
