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gentle lilt
the delicate notes of your poetry
draws me in
closer, closer still
to your quietly beating heart
that emits music
my soul can dance to
the tender delicacies you weave
layer after beautiful layer
I am nearer
to touching heaven
your gentle voice
calls to the angels
& they harken unto you
I am brought to my knees
within the worlds you weave
with verses that speaks to my core
shakes it up & awakens it
to brightened tomorrows
where your sun shines
on the darkness,
the shadows in which I dwell
you haunt my mind
with a depth I can not fathom
lilting songs of the soul
that enter the abyss
calls my name
& I heed your call
coming forth from the desolation
entering a place of your creation
& I am made whole
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Re. gentle lilt
Anonymous
4th Oct 2017 7:17pm
There's always that one voice that reaches deeper than any other can. And we hear it through thunder and screaming sounds. This is utterly beautiful, my lovely Dark Angel. I do so love you
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Re: Re. gentle lilt
4th Oct 2017 8:50pm
thank you lovely one day by day there are many voices that affect me in different ways.. this one just sang to me today.. I love you.. Crim
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4th Oct 2017 7:34pm
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4th Oct 2017 8:50pm
Re. gentle lilt
4th Oct 2017 8:47pm
Haunted by his words but also healed. Your lines inspire and sooth fine Lady. I detect a gentle lilt, and maybe a caress...
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4th Oct 2017 8:51pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow this time it was a poetess who affected me so deeply.. sometimes a poem can heal..love Crim
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2017 11:45pm
so beautiful sweetie.
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4th Oct 2017 11:59pm
Re. gentle lilt
Anonymous
4th Oct 2017 11:57pm
my love this stole my breath...it was as if you were right inside my own chaotic brain and described what it is you do to me with your poetry and our daily conversations...
"I am brought to my knees
within the worlds you weave
with verses that speaks to my core
shakes it up & awakens it
to brightened tomorrows
where your sun shines
on the darkness,
the shadows in which I dwell"
Utterly captivating imagery here...I want to add this and the RL Patrol has blocked me from doing so! Making me grrrrrr.....
In awe of you beautiful one...always in awe...
I love you to the moon and starts and back again
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
"I am brought to my knees
within the worlds you weave
with verses that speaks to my core
shakes it up & awakens it
to brightened tomorrows
where your sun shines
on the darkness,
the shadows in which I dwell"
Utterly captivating imagery here...I want to add this and the RL Patrol has blocked me from doing so! Making me grrrrrr.....
In awe of you beautiful one...always in awe...
I love you to the moon and starts and back again
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
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5th Oct 2017 00:02am
my love i'm so happy you liked this you & other poets make me feel this everyday.. within your poetry I am alive & in the sunshine where the darkness has no reach.. no worries on the RL my beautiful one just that you wanted to is enough.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Re. gentle lilt
4th Oct 2017 11:58pm
Beautiful and tender write Crim, your words fall so elegantly down the page, my heart is warmed :)
- Fairy
- Fairy
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Re: Re. gentle lilt
5th Oct 2017 00:33am
thank you lovely Fairy for such a beautiful comment gifting me smiles :) love Crim
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Anonymous
5th Oct 2017 2:44pm
Thank you so much, my beautiful lady. I will keep your words safe with me.
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5th Oct 2017 2:45pm
thank you lovely lady i was greatly moved by your voice this emotional morning your poetry just sang to me.. love Crim
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Such delicately laced ink, I am left tender <3
“entering a place of your creation / & I am made whole” —Feeling submerged unto my own love life, very relatable with your words here.
A touching ode to love, and the warm dwelling one may find in another.
“entering a place of your creation / & I am made whole” —Feeling submerged unto my own love life, very relatable with your words here.
A touching ode to love, and the warm dwelling one may find in another.
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10th Oct 2017 5:39pm
thank you graciously dearest Nightbird you comments are so beautiful they are poetry themselves.. love Crim
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Anonymous
14th Oct 2017 5:13am
Brenda... simply brilliant.. your words always speak to me.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. gentle lilt
17th Oct 2017 8:23pm
thank you dearest Dave I am so happy to have spoken to your beautiful heart :) I love you.. Brenda