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Camarilla
Seedless sessions
Drawl
Conferences of the crawling
Creep on
While consciences - noxious
Sleep
Acid in your
Eardrums
Hiss with
This singeing
Shit
Savoring it
Setting
Canopies over their
Clustered
Cloistered
Congresses
Pinkies arrect
Casting shadows
Like redwoods
&
Casting you out
Drawl
Conferences of the crawling
Creep on
While consciences - noxious
Sleep
Acid in your
Eardrums
Hiss with
This singeing
Shit
Savoring it
Setting
Canopies over their
Clustered
Cloistered
Congresses
Pinkies arrect
Casting shadows
Like redwoods
&
Casting you out
Published 2nd Oct 2017
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- Edited 13th Sep 2022 5:45pm
2nd Oct 2017 10:48pm
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3rd Oct 2017 1:06am
3rd Oct 2017 7:17pm
I love to read your poems out loud at least a couple of times - the flow is extraordinary read tight or soft - so well crafted - The I have to google define for the words I don't know then I enjoy reading it all over again - I love poems that challenge me :-)
3rd Oct 2017 7:48pm
4th Oct 2017 1:48pm
Ahhh the upper eschelon and their infamous elitist snobbery. You've penned it well, AtoMikOne.
4th Oct 2017 3:12pm
It's something I'm struggling through currently, this is like my 10th piece on it 😆 Well, not really. But I've done a few, it's helpful to "get it out"!
4th Oct 2017 10:56pm
18th Jul 2018 10:11pm
Definitely got the idea across... really grabs you with the rythm... and carries on through 'till the end. Nice work.
21st Jul 2018 6:33am
