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if you were here
If you were here.
If you were here,
We would of share a beer,
If you were here,
My problems would disappear,
If you were here,
I would of have no fear,
If you were here,
The pain would not be so severe,
If you were here,
I would of been sincere,
If you were here,
I could of been like Shakespeare,
If you were here,
All would of been clear.
DAD if only you were here!
By Edgar Gordon
If you were here,
We would of share a beer,
If you were here,
My problems would disappear,
If you were here,
I would of have no fear,
If you were here,
The pain would not be so severe,
If you were here,
I would of been sincere,
If you were here,
I could of been like Shakespeare,
If you were here,
All would of been clear.
DAD if only you were here!
By Edgar Gordon
Published 13th Sep 2011
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13th Sep 2011 9:30pm
I don't usually like the repetitive style like this, though the subject really hit home. Also your Shakespeare line was good, it was the use of the word could that really made this line stand out the most.
14th Sep 2011 6:39pm
Thank you!
I am tring all types of poems don't want to restrict myself
To one type but thanks again.
I am tring all types of poems don't want to restrict myself
To one type but thanks again.
