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My Patronus Is A Coffee Pot
The sweetest dose descends
Kneading tenderly...
Limping neuron ends
Mental mists hiss
Percolating - listing
As groggy fogs are hit
By caffeine's kiss
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Another coffee poem I meant to submit yesterday, but was over the limit haha!
Kneading tenderly...
Limping neuron ends
Mental mists hiss
Percolating - listing
As groggy fogs are hit
By caffeine's kiss
***
Another coffee poem I meant to submit yesterday, but was over the limit haha!
Published 30th Sep 2017
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30th Sep 2017 7:33pm
Perhaps over he limit in cups of coffee too... lol
Another good read on a topic I cannot fathom, but I do understand caffeine addiction. I looooove diet Mountain Dew. Original MD turned me into a diabetic but I still gotta get my caffeine fix, so diet is my dew...
Nice job on the sequel!
JJ
Another good read on a topic I cannot fathom, but I do understand caffeine addiction. I looooove diet Mountain Dew. Original MD turned me into a diabetic but I still gotta get my caffeine fix, so diet is my dew...
Nice job on the sequel!
JJ
30th Sep 2017 7:36pm
Oh thank you! MD was my favorite as well through my teenage years :) I didn't really turn to coffee until I was 20 (when I got pregnant with my first daughter). Have you had AMP by MD? Those are tasty too...I was addicted to energy drinks for a while. Now I'm just a coffee person haha!
30th Sep 2017 8:21pm
I've had to be sugar free ever since I discoved I was diabetic. 2 sickpacks a day of Dew will DO you in! Lol, i don't think they make those other ones in diet...
30th Sep 2017 9:30pm
Oh gotcha! I thought maybe they did, but I could just be thinking of Monster and Rockstar. Yeah that's definitely a LOT of sugar. I was chatting on my other poem with David about being sugar-free/ketogenic as well. Seems like there's a few of us who can't tolerate sugar. I'm not diabetic, but I have PCOS so I don't process glucose well either. Stay strong!
1st Oct 2017 1:37am
I actually succumbed to a cup today after almost 70 hours of work! Then took a nap immediately afterward! Sometimes caffeine can't even help.
Another great piece, AtoMikOne.
Another great piece, AtoMikOne.
1st Oct 2017 2:55am
Yup, there are those days :( Glad you got a rest! I get one or two days a month like that, if you get my drift...
1st Oct 2017 2:30am
just fascinating - I mean it's just a cup of coffee, isn't it? you romatisised it so well :-)
excellent ink :-) I am now gonna make coffee :-)
excellent ink :-) I am now gonna make coffee :-)
Ah, a kindling of words to warm and energize the mind!! Fresh pot please!! :)
16th Oct 2017 7:07pm
16th Oct 2017 9:05pm
3rd Nov 2017 3:39am
This is such a wonderful description of a quick, yet insanely complex experience. It actually reminds me very much of what I was trying to capture in one of my older poems. Great job!
3rd Nov 2017 4:03am
Haha thank you! Yes!! It really is complex, and even saying that almost sounds trit, but it's complicated and nuanced.
