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Baby, your --- is so Super
Let's be real,
it has that indefinable
pull, to make a brotha
wanna cop a feel...
simply watchin' it lie
in a dormant state
gotta admit, it's an
incredible edible plate,
I'd like to serve my face
n' hands to...
I'm in a hungered state
wanna rub it, n' smack it,
pull the big stick out
n' back it in onto my staff
rock baby til she's rollin'
reelin' as she'd be squealin'
on my meat craft...
flying' high, we sigh
our pleasures seized
bumpin' with my grind-in
cummin' with such ease...
this, all a direct result
of how you make my
soldier stand indignant
in his lascivious stupor...
because baby when
you bounce, pop,
flash, n' shake
that sweet ass...
it's truly SUPER!!
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Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 4:06pm
unholy hell Poe this is so sexy
yet with the touch of tenderness
because I know that's how you roll
you love your lady passionately
& it shows in this write..
love Crim
yet with the touch of tenderness
because I know that's how you roll
you love your lady passionately
& it shows in this write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 4:12pm
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 7:39pm
Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 7:45pm
Well then by all means do them!! Plz lol... Thank you my sweetheart I'm honored n very grateful...
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 7:58pm
word-
I like big butts and I can't deny- ah hell, I like butts period-
I dug it...bravo
I like big butts and I can't deny- ah hell, I like butts period-
I dug it...bravo
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Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 8:36pm
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 8:06pm
clearly i gotta stop missing meals if this is the reaction to a little more somethin somethin in my latex pants lol
hawt write poe
xx
hawt write poe
xx
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Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
Mami, ur perfect as u are, BUT I'd never criticize a woman that aspires to add more plump to her rump lol...thank u!
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28th Sep 2017 8:48pm
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Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 9:13pm
Lol...thank you my dear, I'm honored...n Yea that 'trunk' deserves alot of accolades lol
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 9:37pm
Unlike my comment on "Precipice", I know where this train's chuggin' to, cuz it's on "my" mind's track.
Enjoyable
flap-n-flow,
Poe
Upright-n-tight
write.
Enjoyable
flap-n-flow,
Poe
Upright-n-tight
write.
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Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 9:57pm
Lol, so ur saying the gig is up n you know I'm a big booty fan!? Lol...well ur right of course n I'm guilty as charged lol...thank u my dear one :)
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
Anonymous
28th Sep 2017 11:02pm
Now, this is poetry.
Excellent rhyming, great cheeks!
:)
Excellent rhyming, great cheeks!
:)
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Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
28th Sep 2017 11:18pm
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
1st Oct 2017 10:55am
Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
1st Oct 2017 11:48am
Your mind wanders to where? Lol Thank you sweetie, I'm grateful you loved it n that u added it to ur RL...appreciate that alot :)
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
1st Oct 2017 12:13pm
This is so real through you pen Ric....It can't be only your imagination right...Love the vivid imagery.... RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
1st Oct 2017 12:22pm
Well if it's not clear by now that I love a nice ass, folks will never know lol as for the drawing, that IS from the imagination lol. Thank you sweetie, appreciate you bunches :)
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
3rd Oct 2017 3:44pm
Wow Poe what a tribute! It's great when a man loves a women and worships all her curves. She's a lucky lady
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Re: Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
3rd Oct 2017 6:18pm
I'm the one that feels lucky she even gives me the time of day... thank you my dear sweetness...appreciate u much :)
Re. Baby, your --- is so Super
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Oct 2017 7:18pm
9th Oct 2017 7:15pm
How do you make something so sexy so passionate at the same time lol. Hot. Love it :)
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