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Beyond the Now
Sitting on the mountain top
Overlooking trees, valleys and peaks
A View of how small and
Insignificant we truly are,
She feels like a pillar of dust
Being slowly brushed away
By wind and rain
Overlooking trees, valleys and peaks
A View of how small and
Insignificant we truly are,
She feels like a pillar of dust
Being slowly brushed away
By wind and rain
Published 27th Sep 2017
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27th Sep 2017 8:09pm
I wish I could call you a false prophet, but that's what we're fast becoming "slowly brushed away By wind and rain"...
28th Sep 2017 3:31am
28th Sep 2017 4:55am
Though we be small, our influence can be measured by our influence on the temperature on a global scale...
Enjoyed the read! JJ
Enjoyed the read! JJ
29th Sep 2017 5:16pm
I feel this so much. Love sitting on the mountain top and overlooking too.....the beauty of mother nature always makes me forget who i am.......RoseJamsminr
29th Sep 2017 5:18pm
I feel this so much. Love sitting on the mountain top and overlooking too.....the beauty of mother nature always makes me forget who i am.......RoseJamsminr
29th Sep 2017 7:51pm
30th Sep 2017 10:48pm
beautiful :-) the second stanza is poetic perfection - I really love this one :-)
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2017 4:06pm
Ethereal beauty here, we are insubstantial in the face of the vastness.
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2017 8:29am
i love the view my honey, deeply enjoyed.. makes me
want to find home again
want to find home again
