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Three word 5-7-5 Haikus (7.0)
Three word 5-7-5 Haikus (7.0)
(i) learning to walk again
flexibility
Maneuverability
determination
(ii) Internal Change
Individual
Individualizing
Possibility
(iii) Reformation
Ideology
Imaginativeness
Interpretation
(iv) Wheelchair Access
Disability
Unmanageability
Discrimination
(v) Let’s Argue
Differentiate
Disagreeability
Participation
(vi) Bugs
Laboratory
Bacteriological
Classification
(vii) Still On The Shelf
Negotiation
Marriageability
Anniversary
(i) learning to walk again
flexibility
Maneuverability
determination
(ii) Internal Change
Individual
Individualizing
Possibility
(iii) Reformation
Ideology
Imaginativeness
Interpretation
(iv) Wheelchair Access
Disability
Unmanageability
Discrimination
(v) Let’s Argue
Differentiate
Disagreeability
Participation
(vi) Bugs
Laboratory
Bacteriological
Classification
(vii) Still On The Shelf
Negotiation
Marriageability
Anniversary
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Re. Three word 5-7-5 Haikus (7.0)
Anonymous
24th Sep 2017 10:04pm
What great words for each category. You have far more patience than I do for thinking these through. You are: amazing, invaluable, huggable! Did I do it right? Giggling hugs for you! ☺

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25th Sep 2017 10:04pm
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24th Sep 2017 10:19pm
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Re. Three word 5-7-5 Haikus (7.0)
Anonymous
25th Sep 2017 2:11am
Hey David......you're exploring your gifted talent and I'm liking it......super ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)

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25th Sep 2017 10:05pm
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25th Sep 2017 2:40pm
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25th Sep 2017 10:06pm
yep - sometimes less is more - they might have been too personal? thank you much :-)
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25th Sep 2017 10:16pm
Show too much ? I think there is beauty in vulnerability ... even if it's just a shaft of light ... it gives depth and strength .. nothing to be ashamed of .. I think the world would be a better place if we all let the armour fall more often... 😊
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Re: Re. Three word 5-7-5 Haikus (7.0)
25th Sep 2017 10:19pm
I just kinda wondered because the references are personal to me whether others would get them :-)
Re: Re. Three word 5-7-5 Haikus (7.0)
25th Sep 2017 10:40pm
I understand ... there may be those who don't necessarily understand the depth of what you wrote ... but, can still relate on some level .. that's the beauty of what we share ...
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Re. Three word 5-7-5 Haikus (7.0)
25th Sep 2017 3:50pm
Such precise, perfect little pieces, mo Chara!
Your creatively amazing skill continues to become more, and more inventive!! i have honestly, never considered this modernized form of Haiku, (or perhaps, even Senryu), but i must tell you, these are remarkable! Each word so meticulously selected--meaning, as related to title, and syllable count....requires not only diligence, but imagination as well!
Applause!!!....and....Great BIG Hugs!!
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Your creatively amazing skill continues to become more, and more inventive!! i have honestly, never considered this modernized form of Haiku, (or perhaps, even Senryu), but i must tell you, these are remarkable! Each word so meticulously selected--meaning, as related to title, and syllable count....requires not only diligence, but imagination as well!
Applause!!!....and....Great BIG Hugs!!
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Re: Re. Three word 5-7-5 Haikus (7.0)
25th Sep 2017 11:00pm
awe thank you Hum, you are too kind, but I won't stop you (lol) :-) Loads of Big Huge hugs :-) Poet Read poems by David_Macleod