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Cat Haikus 5.0 - Inspired by David_MacLeod
(i) Inspiration
Cat claws climbing on
Haikus evolving smartly
You and kitten click.
(ii) Dreams
Fat cat sleeps in bed
Catnip fun has him too tired
Slim dreams in his head.
(iii) Mr. Patrick
Maine Coon purrs deeply
Laying between my spread legs
Fingers rub his head.
(iv) Suzie
Black and white Miss priss
Marching across the carpet
Kitty paws lead on.
(v) Thanks
My favorite pet
The theme of your poetry
Thank you for the write.
Thank you David for turning me onto haikus. This was in response to Cat Haikus 7.0 by David_MacLeod
Cat claws climbing on
Haikus evolving smartly
You and kitten click.
(ii) Dreams
Fat cat sleeps in bed
Catnip fun has him too tired
Slim dreams in his head.
(iii) Mr. Patrick
Maine Coon purrs deeply
Laying between my spread legs
Fingers rub his head.
(iv) Suzie
Black and white Miss priss
Marching across the carpet
Kitty paws lead on.
(v) Thanks
My favorite pet
The theme of your poetry
Thank you for the write.
Thank you David for turning me onto haikus. This was in response to Cat Haikus 7.0 by David_MacLeod
Published 17th Sep 2017
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18th Sep 2017 00:26am
18th Sep 2017 00:57am
I stole it from David, he does these in batches of 5 or 7. This was actually my comment to his haikus, kind of a hats off to his work. I am so glad that you liked them.
18th Sep 2017 2:08am
Anonymous
18th Sep 2017 4:56pm
You brought cats to the screen so beautifully with these. Each their own personality
18th Sep 2017 7:56pm
It was a lot of fun, several are cats I have owned. The others a tribute to my man David
Anonymous
18th Sep 2017 7:11pm
Loved this Robert! A fan of cats I could see everything and I like that...I'm a visual gal! Had me curled up as I enjoyed!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
18th Sep 2017 7:58pm
Curled up like a kitten, lol. Cats are a favorite to me. Were you purring as you read them. I am glad you enjoyed them.
18th Sep 2017 11:08pm
I particularly like number (ii) but they are all very good and a difference in style is clearly obvious - thats a good thing you have put your own stamp on them - great stuff :-)
18th Sep 2017 11:59pm
