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thug love
each scar i bear
is flavored with you
your masculine thug style
brings back memories
of a former life
you've left your mark
like the backhand
you long to give me
i see it in your eyes
when i look at you hard
your eyes say it all
if you were mine
bitch you would show respect
& i do but damn it
i can't help but challenge you
a lady who longs for a rough fucking
from a man that is rock strong
pisses nails
i'm a masochistic bad girl
who needs your Dominant hand
to put me in my place
i've been running wild
the little girl in me lost
the streets run in my blood
they call & i can't help but answer
put the smack down on me
cos i need to feel safe
i'm trembling on the inside
afraid of what tomorrow brings
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Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 8:33am
The thug life? Nicely written I like this part the best (when i look at you hard
your eyes say it all) because I have gotten into a few fight with thugs trying to stair me down.
your eyes say it all) because I have gotten into a few fight with thugs trying to stair me down.
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17th Sep 2017 8:56am
Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 10:33am
I guess can't profess to being a thug...
I'd choke the shit outta u, smack ya ass backwards, n piss down your throat...
But then I'd feel horrible to hurt anyone that precious... so I guess I'm a softy...lol
I'd choke the shit outta u, smack ya ass backwards, n piss down your throat...
But then I'd feel horrible to hurt anyone that precious... so I guess I'm a softy...lol
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Re: Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 1:48pm
Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 12:00pm
There are so many times that runs through my head,,, except the thug part that word always reminds me of guys with those baggy ass pants looking all stupid
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Re: Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 1:51pm
thank you for your thoughts it's deeply appreciated.. you know it's funny the word thug bothered me in this poem too upon reflection it's really not the right word to describe the type of man I mean.. I meant to describe a tough man not actually a thug.. pleased you enjoyed.. love Crim
Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 7:46pm
we have one bad thing in common - I have the fear every day about the following day - don't know how to shake it off :-(
Huge big hugs for tomorrow and today :-)
Huge big hugs for tomorrow and today :-)
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Re: Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 10:55pm
aw David I feel you my friend it's the always waiting for the other shoe to drop.. I deeply cherish your presence dear soul.. love & hugs Brenda
Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 7:48pm
Crim, I love this and would probably respect the thug involved. My favorite line, though, is this: "I can't help but challenge you." I just hope you give as good as you get. Wonderful work!
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Re: Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 10:57pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow oh believe me I do give it back ten fold ;) love Crim
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2017 10:17pm
My Beautiful Brenda...my love there are so many facets to you...the little girl, the lady, the masochistic whore...lover, fighter...all wrapped into a bundle that I simply can't help but adore and love deeply...fierce tone in this ink...smacking it down raw the way I love it
I love you so much
your always & forever
xoxo Taryn
I love you so much
your always & forever
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. thug love
17th Sep 2017 10:59pm
thank you my love you always move my heart with your deep understanding & connection we share i would be completely adrift without you.. i love you passionately.. love Brenda
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19th Sep 2017 6:44pm
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2017 3:22pm
Sometimes it's the pain that makes us feel most alive...most familiar. And that familiarity can be a dangerous thing. You bring your own brand of fierce to every piece you place on these pages. And I'm so very honored to number you among my friends. I do so love you, my beautiful Dark Angel
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Re: Re. thug love
19th Sep 2017 6:45pm
thank you lovely one yes it is his intensity that draws me a hard character that has a soft spot for me it does indeed make me feel alive.. I love you dearly & appreciate you deeply.. love Crim
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Re: Re. thug love
19th Sep 2017 6:47pm
thank you lovely Daniella yes that's exactly it you understand the need to be desired so passionately yes the pain & pleasure of it is intense :) love Brenda
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20th Sep 2017 4:37pm
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2017 00:30am
Brenda.. this shows the many sides of you.. i respect each and every one.. and never feeling afraid to be you.. love you my sister, forever and always..
Dave
Dave
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28th Sep 2017 3:43pm
Re. thug love
19th Dec 2017 2:04am
Re: Re. thug love
19th Dec 2017 2:07am
thank you dearest Xmar
yes at times I do
though sometimes
I desire a soft touch..
thank you for the love on this write..
love Brenda
yes at times I do
though sometimes
I desire a soft touch..
thank you for the love on this write..
love Brenda