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Terra firma
Look at you, treading my thoughts
like a sailor on leave makin' a break for shore,
dredging the ocean depths
where the mermaids sing like sirens.
Visions of soft women and hard drinks
crash land on the beach.
The scent of salted perfume
infiltrates a place I've never been to.
I'll be the one at the bar
with the legs that go all the way to heaven,
persuading men that their someone
is not me.
You rode in on a tempest wind,
those rogue waves behind your eyes
crashing into me.
And I was so thirsty.
When the clepsydra runs dry,
and a lonely sea pulls at the sand
beneath your feet,
I won't ask you to stay.
I won't.
(Artwork unknown)
like a sailor on leave makin' a break for shore,
dredging the ocean depths
where the mermaids sing like sirens.
Visions of soft women and hard drinks
crash land on the beach.
The scent of salted perfume
infiltrates a place I've never been to.
I'll be the one at the bar
with the legs that go all the way to heaven,
persuading men that their someone
is not me.
You rode in on a tempest wind,
those rogue waves behind your eyes
crashing into me.
And I was so thirsty.
When the clepsydra runs dry,
and a lonely sea pulls at the sand
beneath your feet,
I won't ask you to stay.
I won't.
(Artwork unknown)
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Re. Terra firma
Anonymous
14th Sep 2017 3:43am
My Sweet Kasai...I felt this from the first line to the last...a bittersweet in here...but that ending...I shake my head...we do ask often times don't we and at some point something happens and we won't...realizing we are deserving of more, of one who could truly see, value and cherish all we have to offer...a beautiful day indeed...I hope one day I meet with it...poignant, powerful and achingly beautiful ink my friend...much love to you....
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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17th Sep 2017 7:01am
Look forward to that day, sweet lady, we both will. Those comments, so thoughtful and profound, I could just squeeze you... Many thank you's, dear Taryn...
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17th Sep 2017 7:02am
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14th Sep 2017 11:03pm
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Thank you, Jaded one, for feeling the ache of my words. Knowing it was felt is quite the complement.
I'm glad you've decided to keep it...
I'm glad you've decided to keep it...
Re. Terra firma
15th Sep 2017 4:13pm
This is so beautiful Kasai ...and filled with so many emotions ... there are few who take my breath .. this is one that has ...
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17th Sep 2017 7:09am
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16th Sep 2017 5:57am
This is a breathtaking piece....I can't describe with words....so a RL for me to remenber the beauty and sadness....RoseJasmine
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17th Sep 2017 7:12am
Words are not always easy to find, but the RL means much more than just. Thank you much, RoseJasmine...
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18th Sep 2017 5:23am
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18th Sep 2017 5:35am
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23rd Sep 2017 9:24am
Such sorrow made palpable with imagery drenching the senses. The depth of such sadness falls to the ocean's floor...
JJ
JJ
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23rd Sep 2017 10:28am
So glad you came by, JJ, I appreciate that. And thank you much for the wonderful comment...
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26th Sep 2017 10:00am
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18th Oct 2017 9:15am
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Ah, there you are, John, there you are. It's very nice to see you here again, you've been missed...