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No Surprise
Every
Day
A
New
Cliche
Something
Stained
Inked
In
Pain
Rollercoaster
Of
A
Game
So
What
Will
It
Take
For
My
Own
Sake
To
See
Things
Through
My
Eyes
Treat
Me
Like
It's
No
Surprise?
Day
A
New
Cliche
Something
Stained
Inked
In
Pain
Rollercoaster
Of
A
Game
So
What
Will
It
Take
For
My
Own
Sake
To
See
Things
Through
My
Eyes
Treat
Me
Like
It's
No
Surprise?
Published 13th Sep 2017
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13th Sep 2017 10:55pm
13th Sep 2017 11:00pm
Post, I think the formatting has done most of the work, I quite like the feel as well :) Always appreciate hearing from you!
14th Sep 2017 1:45am
love the message and the way this poem has been constructed - very clever :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
14th Sep 2017 4:20am
David, so glad you dig it! I quite like the formatting too, gives it an edge. Thanks for commenting!
Anonymous
16th Sep 2017 7:57pm
Fairy.. this is simply brilliant.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
17th Sep 2017 3:42am
