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Not A Sunset
"Not a sunset"
It is nightfall, I stroll
For a year, I just fall
And I open my Facebook
All I see your sunset look
It is nightfall, as I look
The majestic sun is done to work
It is bright and out of reach
It is you, I'm trying to beseech
Just like sunset, please leave
If you don't want to give
A time, a place and a heart
For us to make it start
Just like a sunset, please hide
If you don't want to be by my side
Anywhere, everywhere and forever
For us to start after it is over
But you are not a sunset indeed
Cause you're the dark, not dead
You are also not a sun that falls
And pulls me when I lost my all.
It is nightfall, I stroll
For a year, I just fall
And I open my Facebook
All I see your sunset look
It is nightfall, as I look
The majestic sun is done to work
It is bright and out of reach
It is you, I'm trying to beseech
Just like sunset, please leave
If you don't want to give
A time, a place and a heart
For us to make it start
Just like a sunset, please hide
If you don't want to be by my side
Anywhere, everywhere and forever
For us to start after it is over
But you are not a sunset indeed
Cause you're the dark, not dead
You are also not a sun that falls
And pulls me when I lost my all.
Published 13th Sep 2017
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21st Sep 2017 12:11pm
I felt some dismay which was made by a man. All I want to say is that blocking him on facebook, and don't let him keep affecting your life.....
Personally i like this poem because it has already made me feel the melancholy successfully. Like it!
RoseJasmine
Personally i like this poem because it has already made me feel the melancholy successfully. Like it!
RoseJasmine
29th Sep 2017 5:13am
Thank you. Hahaha, i can't just block him on facebook without a valid reason. The problem is in me. LOL
