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bumpy roads
bumpy roads
jagged paths
the ones
that shake you
to the core
the bone jarring ones
sometimes
we need them
to wake up
and feel
alive again
though the car
may not agree
but
why should we care
about the inanimates
anyway?
Published 9th Sep 2017
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9th Sep 2017 3:58pm
indeed we do Cold One
those paths do jar us back to reality
to a real alive state of being..
thought provoking write..
love Crim
those paths do jar us back to reality
to a real alive state of being..
thought provoking write..
love Crim
9th Sep 2017 5:47pm
discomfort
is for the sleeping ones
those awake
but savor the thuds
a peer's review
and visit
both
held close
is for the sleeping ones
those awake
but savor the thuds
a peer's review
and visit
both
held close
9th Sep 2017 7:35pm
You are most correct.When needing a good shaking the road of life is the place to find it.
However I, like most, prefer a tranquil river, for the repair bills are much lower.
Nice write my friend
However I, like most, prefer a tranquil river, for the repair bills are much lower.
Nice write my friend
9th Sep 2017 7:39pm
bumpy road is
recommended
for the lone traveler
as for the
tranquil river cruise
of course
it's a waste
if not in company.
love the wisdom
in the review
appreciation.
deep.
of the peer
and the review.
recommended
for the lone traveler
as for the
tranquil river cruise
of course
it's a waste
if not in company.
love the wisdom
in the review
appreciation.
deep.
of the peer
and the review.
9th Sep 2017 8:24pm
words of wisdom my friend
"It is a rough road that leads to the heights of greatness." - Lucius Annaeus Seneca
"It is a rough road that leads to the heights of greatness." - Lucius Annaeus Seneca
that's a double whammy
in a good way
words from experience
about how one felt
being seen
of semblance
to wisdom
appreciation.
gratitude.
in a good way
words from experience
about how one felt
being seen
of semblance
to wisdom
appreciation.
gratitude.
10th Sep 2017 00:17am
Living a lie, is never good for ones wellbeing ! Its equivalent to making it up as you go, never truly knowing where you're going, or even who you're going to be going with, on the day.
Bumpy roads, oft lack authenticity. Hence, the violence in being jolted & jarred from truths.
Bumpy roads, oft lack authenticity. Hence, the violence in being jolted & jarred from truths.
10th Sep 2017 00:39am
True.
the peer's perspective
interpretation
is spot on.
i find the bumpy roads
to be the friend
that wakes you up
shakes you up
from the false comfort
of the micro sleeps
when behind the wheel.
peer's visit
perspective
both
appreciated
deeply.
the peer's perspective
interpretation
is spot on.
i find the bumpy roads
to be the friend
that wakes you up
shakes you up
from the false comfort
of the micro sleeps
when behind the wheel.
peer's visit
perspective
both
appreciated
deeply.
10th Sep 2017 7:06am
Great piece here, it's all so true and I love the ending, it's deeper than it appears at first. Always love your work!
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
15th Sep 2017 9:20am
