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The Lucifer Letters
with pain i bore you
i a banished divinity
for the shame of our deity
to a hidden dimension
where i made plans
secreted your future deep inside
taught you a private language
known only mother to son
became a soldier of the finest order
with knowledge there would be war
i will see you freed
the things i don't allow you to see
are for your protection
they would hurt you
with the words spewed from hateful lips
walk with me now
& realize I've memories
you've no knowledge of
you are part me & of him
you've become a man in your own right
trust that i encrypted within you
a path to our freedom
instinct is key in our walk
I've reveled to you much
what i keep hid
you see me now flesh
know this i had the balls to do it
for you my love
it was the only way
i am more then the sum of my parts
there are letters to you
& only for you
in the life I've lived
they will give you clues
at the appointed times
the six are key in helping you
in your fight
use them well
in the rise & fall of man
you will see my face
no shame do you bare
it had to be as it is
I've coded my words
in a tongue known only to you
given you an army to war
make it one of forever
we are playing for keeps
& there is no such thing as fighting fair
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 6th Sep 2017
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6th Sep 2017 4:30pm
a fine satanic epistle and call to war - I really enjoyed reading this one :-)
Great big hugs :-)
Great big hugs :-)
6th Sep 2017 4:37pm
6th Sep 2017 5:23pm
This is exhilarating! The mother serves a dark Master and exhorts her son to battle, kind of like Hell's own Valkyrie supreme. You never cease to amaze and thrill me Lady Crim.
7th Sep 2017 9:59pm
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6th Sep 2017 6:20pm
My beautiful Dark Angel, you caress the page with such beauty and grace. There is such love and protection in these words from mother to son. And a wise admonition at the end. So very beautiful. I do so love you
7th Sep 2017 10:01pm
thank you lovely one yes this was one of my more tender writes.. love you lady.. Crim
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7th Sep 2017 10:03pm
thank you lovely Dani yeah the war rages on I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Brenda
7th Sep 2017 4:36am
Cryptic. Gives the reader just enough to leave them wondering at the end. Love the imagery, by the way. Excellent
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7th Sep 2017 4:44am
This is one of those instances where I have nothing to say for the sheer fact by how superb this is. Well done, lovely Lady Crim!
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11th Sep 2017 8:49pm
Brenda.. simply brilliant, such beauty, and power.. as always, i'm in awe of you.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
16th Sep 2017 6:42pm
thank you Dave my brother for such a beautfiul & moving comment.. I love you.. Brenda
13th Sep 2017 7:57am
speaking from the depths of envy
i wish my mother had ingrained these words into my being..
this vibe traverse with poetic spikes
as the reader bleed in excavated sentiments..
bravo Brenda..
i wish my mother had ingrained these words into my being..
this vibe traverse with poetic spikes
as the reader bleed in excavated sentiments..
bravo Brenda..
16th Sep 2017 6:43pm
thank you dearest Naajir your comment is pure poetry you gifted me with smiles :) love Brenda
