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we are nothing but dreams
dusk spreads its wings for the weeping
and my fingers follow slow, quivering
gathering last of dew from leaves
there under the Eucalyptus tree
i see you waiting, golden sliver
in your eyes and metaphors
dripping from your tongue
i drink every word drunk
in yesterday's wine
listening to songs of
your heartbeat before dawn
the tormented ocean whines
at our feet
recedes
greeting with salty kiss
and
i fail to answer your questions
my gaze resting on fallen stars
knowing soon you'd vanish
with blood orange moon
my nakedness blooming
beneath your shirt
scent of promises
lingering from frayed threads
the aching throb of
languorous lover pulsates in
nocturnal sky
refolding all that's left behind
remembering:
remembrance is not redemption
recognition is not acknowledgment
conquest is not happiness
and
a smile on horizontal sheets
are always lost on innocence
when the broken is never healed
in dreams
we are nothing more than dreams
words are never enough
nothing
is
just as this poem
is
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
5th Sep 2017 5:49pm
I enjoy the way this poem moves smoothly there is beauty with the economy and a heartfelt pulse which makes the reading easy and relaxing .Kexby On my reading list
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
6th Sep 2017 3:41am
Thank you Mr. Kexby for calling it. I woke up with a heavy heart this morning and it needed to be written and this is the best i could capture. The feelings lingered and i wished it woudn't have ended but it did.
Re. we are nothing but dreams
5th Sep 2017 6:46pm
nothing.
everything.
nothing.
and in between the nothing to nothing,
there
lies poetry
poem
is a journey over a calm river
with pretty strong undercurrents
just below the surface.
S2 l1- Eucalyptus.
everything.
nothing.
and in between the nothing to nothing,
there
lies poetry
poem
is a journey over a calm river
with pretty strong undercurrents
just below the surface.
S2 l1- Eucalyptus.
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
5th Sep 2017 11:07pm
Thanks for checking. I only had couple min of posting before starting work. Much appreciation for your comment.
Re. we are nothing but dreams
5th Sep 2017 6:48pm
Truly, more times than I'd like to admit, this how I feel...excellent spillage Vee...
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
7th Sep 2017 3:29am
Pleases me that you can relate to it but it also saddens me knowing how that void feels like a ton but seeing your comment always makes me smile PIKM :) thank you.
Re. we are nothing but dreams
5th Sep 2017 7:23pm
Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
7th Sep 2017 4:13pm
It sure does Tim, in dreams we are naked with our soul, thanks for enjoying this take on my dream, always good to see you my friend :)
Re. we are nothing but dreams
5th Sep 2017 7:50pm
Rina...mo Chara chotha`imid...
This one reads with such a sense of serenity...almost an ethereal essence within the unique, creative beauty of your words. .Indeed---as in correlation with your title,it feels as if i was drifting slowly thru a dream-like state of consciousness..your vivid imagery placing my senses into heightened awareness!
And, as a matter of fact, i couldn't help but be reminded of Poe's poem, "A Dream Within A Dream", with your reference to the ocean, and, most especially, with your final stanza
This piece resonates deeply for me..leaves me adrift in thoughts and memories--coaxing me to re-read it, again....and again....( therefore, i will be keeping it close at hand...).
This one reads with such a sense of serenity...almost an ethereal essence within the unique, creative beauty of your words. .Indeed---as in correlation with your title,it feels as if i was drifting slowly thru a dream-like state of consciousness..your vivid imagery placing my senses into heightened awareness!
And, as a matter of fact, i couldn't help but be reminded of Poe's poem, "A Dream Within A Dream", with your reference to the ocean, and, most especially, with your final stanza
This piece resonates deeply for me..leaves me adrift in thoughts and memories--coaxing me to re-read it, again....and again....( therefore, i will be keeping it close at hand...).
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
5th Sep 2017 8:53pm
Rina, I always enjoy the mystery in your work and this is mysterious, sensual, sad, romantic...so emblematic of your beautiful mind. This passage is thrilling in its melancholic eroticism (is that even a possible combination?):
"my nakedness blooming
beneath your shirt
scent of promises
lingering from frayed threads"
Bravisima!
"my nakedness blooming
beneath your shirt
scent of promises
lingering from frayed threads"
Bravisima!
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
6th Sep 2017 3:24am
You are a poet of remarkable endowment to pull such haunting lines from the depths of your dreams and spread them before our eyes. I am reminded of the gentle, subtle profundity of Yeats - The Cloths of Heaven.
It makes me ache behind doors that are long closed in my heart, from end to end, so I want to pick out passages but I find myself unable to do so. It's a wonderment of true heart, the kind of writing I look for as I sift through all the artifice and agenda I encounter in my wanderings.
It makes me ache behind doors that are long closed in my heart, from end to end, so I want to pick out passages but I find myself unable to do so. It's a wonderment of true heart, the kind of writing I look for as I sift through all the artifice and agenda I encounter in my wanderings.
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
6th Sep 2017 10:27am
I can't say much that hasn't already been said but this is truly a masterful piece of poetry. Your talent amazes once again, my friend.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
6th Sep 2017 7:21pm
Very clean and concise with this one, miss. Even an ogre like myself can feel what you are saying here. As if it were a page from my own book..
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
6th Sep 2017 11:48pm
From the abyss of our minds come great poetry...this is great poetry Vee.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
7th Sep 2017 00:31am
Racking up z RL Rightfully!!!
You know my thoughts to dreams...they are part of life and Always worth the energy!!
Beautiful stuff here Starchild...hope the Beauty of such dreams visit again!!!
You know my thoughts to dreams...they are part of life and Always worth the energy!!
Beautiful stuff here Starchild...hope the Beauty of such dreams visit again!!!
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
7th Sep 2017 3:15am
Hey Vee......this is a gorgeous ink......i have no words to express the emotions this made me feel.......enjoyed very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. we are nothing but dreams
2nd Oct 2017 9:10pm
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
15th Mar 2021 1:52am
Re. we are nothing but dreams
15th Mar 2021 1:49am
yes we all have dreams some come true and others do not as you say dreams are only dreams words are what we try to tell how we feel about the dreams
well done
well done
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
15th Mar 2021 1:54am
Re. we are nothing but dreams
Oh dear. Sounds like you were far from satisfied here. Yes indeed, why are so many people full of shit! Lol.
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
18th Sep 2021 2:55am
Re. we are nothing but dreams
18th Sep 2021 3:07am
You are spreading your wings to soar into the sky as high as possible. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
18th Sep 2021 3:13am
Re. we are nothing but dreams
1st Oct 2021 4:02am
''remembering:
remembrance is not redemption
recognition is not acknowledgment
conquest is not happiness ''
SOLD!!!
It's good reading you again.
remembrance is not redemption
recognition is not acknowledgment
conquest is not happiness ''
SOLD!!!
It's good reading you again.
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
1st Oct 2021 4:21am
Naajir, how are you my friend?
It's been ages, so much has changed. I hope you're well and I'm so glad to see that you're still at this site.
I've always enjoyed your work. Talk about old school. We sure have plenty of tales to tell but sometimes is it worth if the audience aint there, will they get it, will it matter?!
The good ole times..eh!
>3
It's been ages, so much has changed. I hope you're well and I'm so glad to see that you're still at this site.
I've always enjoyed your work. Talk about old school. We sure have plenty of tales to tell but sometimes is it worth if the audience aint there, will they get it, will it matter?!
The good ole times..eh!
>3
Re. we are nothing but dreams
7th Jan 2022 6:07am
This is a truly beautiful pen lovely. Adorning all those perfect words is this gem. “words are never enough” I’ve spent the better part of my life trying to find words that can say what I feel at any point in time. Because the things I feel don’t stay inside for long. It will come out. I have to write. I have to try to express what I feel or it hurts. I can’t help it. We can’t help it. I’ve thousands of pages from 30 odd yrs of thoughts that I’ve never read back. Because I know I’ve not found the words yet.
I’m glad your words are still not enough girl. If they were you wouldn’t keep writing. You keep trying to tell me and I’ll keep trying to understand. It’s a beautiful thing Ms Vee. xo
I’m glad your words are still not enough girl. If they were you wouldn’t keep writing. You keep trying to tell me and I’ll keep trying to understand. It’s a beautiful thing Ms Vee. xo
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
10th Jul 2022 6:15am
I'm smiling ear to ear, i can't believe you're back!! Wow such a thrill to see old friends back again. Back in the day we rocked DU with our great circle of friends. I know I've disappeared myself for sometime, but I haven't stopped writing. I'm doing more of micro poetry nowadays at another site which I'm enjoying tremendously. I hope life has been good to you. I miss you!
Re. we are nothing but dreams
i enjoy these poems about nature and ones that each reader can develop their own understanding
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Re: Re. we are nothing but dreams
17th Jul 2022 11:19pm
Thank you. I appreciate you stopping by. It looks like you're new at Du. Hope you like it.