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Autumn
September is come with the cold rain
People are walking under umbrella
Leaves begin to fall
Wind is much powerful
Rain drop from up to earth
Sun is less
The soul is so nostalgic
But my skin is waiting the cold rain
A lonely couple walking in the rain under umbrella
And each drop of rain make He and She
Feel the sense of love in the rain
Hand to hand are one soul
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Re. Autumn
5th Sep 2017 11:17am
Sharing an umbrella... brings people closer ~ ☂🌞🌷😎🎈
This, was lovely ! ☺
This, was lovely ! ☺
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Re. Autumn
7th Sep 2017 10:13pm
Really like this one ... I love Autumn ... a reminder that Winter is coming. Walks in the rain are another favorite. I'd love to make love in a secluded meadow with a soft warm rain. Thanks, this one evokes such memories and fantasies!
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Re. Autumn
7th Sep 2017 10:16pm
Re. Autumn
13th Sep 2017 4:06pm
Very nice to read this poem. I can feel the beautiful love between the two people. Thank you
for sharing...
RoseJasmine
for sharing...
RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
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8th Oct 2017 10:25pm
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8th Oct 2017 10:51pm
Re. Autumn
9th Oct 2017 4:05am
Love this piece misterspank, But my skin is awaiting the cold rain. I love this line for some odd reason.
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17th Oct 2017 12:02pm
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17th Oct 2017 8:18pm
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2017 7:53pm
Nice write. Brings a feeling of warmth despite the elements described
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20th Oct 2017 8:19pm
Re. Autumn
21st Oct 2017 5:46pm
beautiful imagery, wonderful just wonderful in a few lines, thanks
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21st Oct 2017 6:17pm
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6th Nov 2017 7:26pm
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Sep 2019 11:45pm
13th Mar 2018 10:34pm
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13th Mar 2018 11:21pm