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Thoughts about Tango
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KyBtc0k3rFE
Tango...
Dance of passion,
Bodies and minds in a sweet dance
Feelings, touching her shoulders,
Gaze with hot desire in eyes,
Hands and hearts in a deep passion,
Legs and elegant robes,
Kisses and hungry mouth,
Man and wife became
Two part of one apple
Unspoken words became
Sensual dance
Reveal secret story
Made public
of two lovers running in the world
becoming one heart
engaging in secret passions
Published 22nd Aug 2017
| Edited 10th Oct 2017
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23rd Aug 2017 1:54am
Hey Mister.......this is very thought provoking.........few lines yet powerful......well done.......enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Aug 2017 2:53pm
Dear flowergirl . I am very happy you like it and more than to please your mind. I hope to be inspired by you as my second muse.
Thank you very much for break the ice and hope to be followed .
My gratitude.
Thank you very much for break the ice and hope to be followed .
My gratitude.
24th Aug 2017 3:59pm
Thank you very much, dear V the erotic Godess .That gave me more power to continue .
7th Sep 2017 10:02pm
Love, love, love the tango ... two young lovers ... all they have is each other ... then night .. the music ... and the dance. Invented in the poor quarter of Bueno Aires, it is both full of sadness and hope.
7th Sep 2017 10:08pm
I am very glad you like my poem and the dance is a preparation for passion of bodies .
Thank you very much!
Thank you very much!
9th Oct 2017 4:07am
Well damn misterspank I know not to think about a Tango. Great poem thought I like the way in hints happiness but ends in disaster.
Thank you for you advice.I Will try to fix it.
Here are the line:
Reveal secret story
Make public
Secret passion
Two lovers run in the world
To became one heart.
Here are the line:
Reveal secret story
Make public
Secret passion
Two lovers run in the world
To became one heart.
