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Drowning
In a quiet place
Not doing much
If I am
It's not so fun like you think..
Unmotivated to make a move
There's no benefit
Awaiting the fishing hook
Save me..
I'm drowning
Sinking deeper
The sunlight can't even reach me.
Who can save me?
The fish are free here
It's their home
Lucky them
Only if I were a fish
The beyond odd creatures down here
Maybe I belong here
But I'm losing my breath
How ironic
Everyone left
After realizing how useless I was
I didn't spark up much
They're over there
I thought I lost my hearing
But it's just that no one is here
I only hear my silent screams
But no one can hear them
I'm too deep down
Yet I still try
It was deep blue for a while
Now it's dark
I was almost alive for a while
..
Not doing much
If I am
It's not so fun like you think..
Unmotivated to make a move
There's no benefit
Awaiting the fishing hook
Save me..
I'm drowning
Sinking deeper
The sunlight can't even reach me.
Who can save me?
The fish are free here
It's their home
Lucky them
Only if I were a fish
The beyond odd creatures down here
Maybe I belong here
But I'm losing my breath
How ironic
Everyone left
After realizing how useless I was
I didn't spark up much
They're over there
I thought I lost my hearing
But it's just that no one is here
I only hear my silent screams
But no one can hear them
I'm too deep down
Yet I still try
It was deep blue for a while
Now it's dark
I was almost alive for a while
..
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