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me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
me being alone
brings me to such a low ebb
Me, I have no flow
loneliness breaks
my precious porcelain heart
no glue to repair
I am so alone
like a cute dog with no bone
hunger to be seen
brings me to such a low ebb
Me, I have no flow
loneliness breaks
my precious porcelain heart
no glue to repair
I am so alone
like a cute dog with no bone
hunger to be seen
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Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
Anonymous
1st Sep 2017 1:40pm
I can't speak for the world outside of these Underground walls, but in here you will always be seen. I wonder if you've truly felt the force of all the hugs I've sent and seen sent your way. You, my friend, are very much seen and loved. Sending more hugs every day :)

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Re: Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
1st Sep 2017 4:22pm
there is a small band of people in here that are my sanity and salvation and I really mean that. You are one of that small band and the hugs and support mean the world to me :-) these hugs so easy to give you :-)
Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2017 3:27pm
David, these words touch me and are felt more than you know. I have had talks with some who are unable to understand what loneliness is like and I have had talks with some who can see all the loneliness which can surround someone...breaking it down to the tiniest speck...the ones within closest proximity seem to be incapable and the ones which are miles and miles away know it all to well and this is what forms connections and bonds...you and I, along with many others may be "me, myself and I" in the tangible world around us, but in here, in the Underground, we all touch each other more than ever thought to be possible...many hugs and much love to you my friend!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn

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Re: Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
2nd Sep 2017 7:34pm
loneliness is a bit like child birth - in that, unless you've experienced it it is almost impossible to get :-) The other problem is that many lonely people do not want to admit to being lonely, yet another social stigma. It would be good if those who didn't know about loneliness, kept their mouth shut :-) thank you for the wise words my friend :-) Huge Big Hugs :-)
Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
There's nothing more lonely than a stray dog with kind-hearted eyes, David. And ribs of xylophone song.
You've captured the essence of lonely beautifully here.
You've captured the essence of lonely beautifully here.
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Re: Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
2nd Sep 2017 7:26pm
Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
Wow! Amazing! What a beautiful haiku. I especially loved:
"loneliness breaks
my precious porcelain heart
no glue to repair"
An absolute marvel of a haiku poem.
"loneliness breaks
my precious porcelain heart
no glue to repair"
An absolute marvel of a haiku poem.
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Re: Re. me, myself and I - for the Tri-ku Comp
7th Sep 2017 7:05pm
thank you so much - coming from a superb haiku writer that means a lot :-)