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At the end
Was here
Had no fear
Goes on still
For the will to live
Like that, won't be
Had decided very early
Keep yelling, screaming so loud
Cuz we need to be free
Got the life at the end
Harsh, little funny, so sand
Don't you believe mate
Then roam land by land
Had no fear
Goes on still
For the will to live
Like that, won't be
Had decided very early
Keep yelling, screaming so loud
Cuz we need to be free
Got the life at the end
Harsh, little funny, so sand
Don't you believe mate
Then roam land by land
Published 24th Aug 2017
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I believe I understand the meaning of this poem, though the English used is somewhat
broken.
The flame of desire to be free can never be extinguished if the heart wants it bad enough.
All I all, a nice write, keep working on the language, it will come.
Welcome to the DUP
broken.
The flame of desire to be free can never be extinguished if the heart wants it bad enough.
All I all, a nice write, keep working on the language, it will come.
Welcome to the DUP
24th Aug 2017 7:22pm
Thanks a lot.. I just wanted to share it.. It's so old writing but thanks again for your feedback
