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It's Not Funny
It's funny how they said
That it was all my fault
That I'm an alcoholic
A cheater
A whore
It's funny how they said
That it was all a joke
That I'm a liar
I wanted it
I loved it
It's funny how they say
That it doesn't hurt
That I'm not in pain
I am just crazy
A mental case
But it's not funny when I say
I cut to feel
He hurt me
I want to die
Please someone help me
But everyone sits
laughs
stares
Until the day comes
That I cut just deep enough
Then noone will be laughing
That it was all my fault
That I'm an alcoholic
A cheater
A whore
It's funny how they said
That it was all a joke
That I'm a liar
I wanted it
I loved it
It's funny how they say
That it doesn't hurt
That I'm not in pain
I am just crazy
A mental case
But it's not funny when I say
I cut to feel
He hurt me
I want to die
Please someone help me
But everyone sits
laughs
stares
Until the day comes
That I cut just deep enough
Then noone will be laughing
Published 22nd Aug 2017
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23rd Aug 2017 1:01am
You did a great job at expressing the emotions behind self-harm. Please be careful what you wish for. Your asking to go down a path that's just as twisted.
23rd Aug 2017 1:49am
a very clever write, though sad and hard to read, so much rage. But I totally understand that.
I liked this a lot - I'm not laughing now :-/
I liked this a lot - I'm not laughing now :-/
23rd Aug 2017 6:36am
Suicide is terrorism.Worse than any bomb, but similar in their effects; the closer you are to a bomb, the more damage it does when it's blown. I know this because I've inked my semicolon.
But in regards to the expressing of that agony of choice, that ultimate disease of selfperception, you were fantastic. Good ink. Quality word choice and structure. well done.
But in regards to the expressing of that agony of choice, that ultimate disease of selfperception, you were fantastic. Good ink. Quality word choice and structure. well done.
24th Aug 2017 6:08am
People in this generation have forgotten how to care it seems, it looks like a show, for attention... it's truly sickening. You express this beautifully. I'm here if you need :)
- Fairy
- Fairy
