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Sine Infinitas
Were I vampiric
Quenching deathly devoir in only sociopath...
-Blood-
Milking veins restrictedly rigid
By lives of antagonism
My glut would doubtless
Scale deathless
Sailing the endless fringe
A sin beyond even...
Outmost stars
Quenching deathly devoir in only sociopath...
-Blood-
Milking veins restrictedly rigid
By lives of antagonism
My glut would doubtless
Scale deathless
Sailing the endless fringe
A sin beyond even...
Outmost stars
Published 21st Aug 2017
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22nd Aug 2017 11:58am
Sheesh! What a metaphor, AtoMik! There's something about the use of "Socio" and "fringe" here that sends chills up the spine.
Well done.
Well done.
22nd Aug 2017 9:45pm
24th Aug 2017 00:47am
Sometimes I have to puzzle a bit through your poetry, the meaning not apparent to me immediately, but I always like the way it sounds. That's enough to keep me coming back to see what I can find.
24th Aug 2017 5:54am
Thank you! :) I know it's not everyone's preferred style, but it's what comes to me.
Anonymous
29th Aug 2017 1:09am
AtoMik.. nicely done.. welcome to DU..
Dave
Dave
