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I'm in Your Town
Today I'm in your town
Tomorrow somebody else's
Road salesman
You have to see your people
Most visits, 15 minutes or less
Passing through your streets
I try to picture myself living there
I'm drawn to your commerce
A bar, a dry cleaner, restaurants
How would I fit in I wonder
Most of the times I'm just passing through
I'm a city bloke on the outskirts of your town
Show me where to have tea
Get a good sandwich
The park with the shady trees
Comfort in the unknown
Show me
Tomorrow somebody else's
Road salesman
You have to see your people
Most visits, 15 minutes or less
Passing through your streets
I try to picture myself living there
I'm drawn to your commerce
A bar, a dry cleaner, restaurants
How would I fit in I wonder
Most of the times I'm just passing through
I'm a city bloke on the outskirts of your town
Show me where to have tea
Get a good sandwich
The park with the shady trees
Comfort in the unknown
Show me
Published 15th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2017 00:55am
If you wind up in my town, you're way off your beaten path, I think. But I can make you a great sandwich and take you for tasty tea and an afternoon in a beautiful park.
15th Aug 2017 1:06am
15th Aug 2017 3:26am
dearest Poet not much to see in my town a rowdy biker bar
whiskey & a game of pool?
love that you always give a slice of you with each write..
love you..
Brenda
whiskey & a game of pool?
love that you always give a slice of you with each write..
love you..
Brenda
15th Aug 2017 1:20pm
15th Aug 2017 5:13pm
15th Aug 2017 7:17pm
15th Aug 2017 4:38am
Im the mysterious one sitting at the bar with a single malt...just waiting....<3
15th Aug 2017 1:22pm
I'm always intrigued by women drinking whiskey by themselves... Haven't had a drink in almost 6 weeks tho, no so bars lately
Anonymous
15th Aug 2017 5:24am
I'm close but still too far for one of your sales calls sadly..otherwise there are a couple places for a good sandwich, some tea and great conversation..
upstate countrygirl like
- S
xx
upstate countrygirl like
- S
xx
15th Aug 2017 1:23pm
Upstate is a fantasy of mine, my park is my sanctuary, I'm there a lot to build in the quiet needs X
15th Aug 2017 4:57pm
You can come here as long as you don't mind the ferry crossing - haggis and fried mars bars on the menu and a nice malt of course - this island is a bit like Jamaica (without the sunshine) :-)
Big like :-)
Big like :-)
15th Aug 2017 7:18pm
15th Aug 2017 7:28pm
if you end up here, your gps is fucked
but there's a bottle of goose in the freezer
but there's a bottle of goose in the freezer
15th Aug 2017 10:54pm
If I end up there I'll be drinking doubles, it's been 41 days since my last drink. ....
Anonymous
16th Aug 2017 8:21am
Dude this is cool as shit!
Swing by if you're ever in Florida
Swing by if you're ever in Florida
16th Aug 2017 11:45am
Anonymous
16th Aug 2017 12:11pm
West palm beach area
16th Aug 2017 9:44pm
I share a place with my sister in Ft. Lauderdale area., though I haven't been down there in a few years. Maybe this winter ....
Anonymous
17th Aug 2017 3:24am
Let me know !
17th Aug 2017 3:49am
