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Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
If I were dark
not of light
would not the yearn
of blood ease my plight..?
Were it not for my decrepit
disease of evil pleasures
could the cost of innocence
ever be measured...?
Death is darkness
darkness is death.
The blood of the
innocence in my
path. Will this
nightmare end?
Will the warm blood
finally run cold?
Feel my disenchanted breath
kiss you empty of the flesh
spiny fingers crawl along
your innards 'pon first touch,
decomposing your soul's worth...
Brittle, the heart falls into a billion
jagged embittered pieces
your blood now mine to possess
as thy wicked bellowing fortells
what a feast this is...
The blood of the pure
is the only cure for
the hunger I have in
this world of evil.
Though every ones
blood is tainted
with the blood of
demons.
So...If I were dark
not of light...
would not the yearn
of blood ease my plight..?
not of light
would not the yearn
of blood ease my plight..?
Were it not for my decrepit
disease of evil pleasures
could the cost of innocence
ever be measured...?
Death is darkness
darkness is death.
The blood of the
innocence in my
path. Will this
nightmare end?
Will the warm blood
finally run cold?
Feel my disenchanted breath
kiss you empty of the flesh
spiny fingers crawl along
your innards 'pon first touch,
decomposing your soul's worth...
Brittle, the heart falls into a billion
jagged embittered pieces
your blood now mine to possess
as thy wicked bellowing fortells
what a feast this is...
The blood of the pure
is the only cure for
the hunger I have in
this world of evil.
Though every ones
blood is tainted
with the blood of
demons.
So...If I were dark
not of light...
would not the yearn
of blood ease my plight..?
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Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 1:13am
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13th Aug 2017 1:15am
Aaawww...I barely had a chance to see how it looked n there she is! My sweet friend ...for Amber n myself, thank you so much
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 1:16am
Holy Shit you two this is friggin brilliant! Speechless! This must be the day of awesome Collabs. Bravo!!!
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Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 2:37am
Truth to tell, Amber n I wrote this a good while back, but we didn't really get any notice...so I decided to repost it,becuz I believe we did a very good melding of ink... Thank you sweetness,we are pleased you approve :)
Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 3:33am
I honestly can't believe you didn't get any notice last time you posted. I agree you two melded ink perfectly, this piece is seamless and its hard to tell where ones line ends and the other's picks up. It looks like your getting the deserved recognition this go around! Amazed! V
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Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 6:36am
Well I'm happy you liked, n Yea I actually have many ice posted that have Lil to no acknowledgement. I'm ok with it though Just don't want anyone I write with to get short changed ... :)
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 1:16am
This is a beautiful and wonderful piece. Good collaboration you did together.
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13th Aug 2017 6:37am
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 1:43am
only high praise , the highest , in fact. you blended like rain and a thirsty landscape. Just a fantastic display-
great piece!
great piece!
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Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 10:30am
Thank you my friend, deeply grateful we are for your support, n we're happy you enjoyed our effort. :)
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 2:42am
Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 10:41am
Aaawww...considering how masterfully you weave the darkness I've gotta say this is high praise! Ambur n I are thank you graciously my dear Crim... :)
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 2:54am
Hey Poet & Amber.......what a great ink......you write together as one......enjoyed,...,,purple luv and hugs xo :)
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13th Aug 2017 10:43am
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 2:59am
Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 11:12am
Thank you so much my friend, we are grateful for your thoughts n support :)
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 4:44am
Thanks to all of you guys it's been a while since I've posted on here but this is defiantly one of my favorites I've ever had the pleasure of co-writing. I hope to do another piece with poetic soon
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Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Amber)
13th Aug 2017 2:05pm
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
13th Aug 2017 7:02am
Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
13th Aug 2017 11:24am
Thanks bro! Dark revelations of Vampires? Hhhmmm interesting didn't think of that angle. Lol...Anywho we thank u much n appreciate you
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
13th Aug 2017 12:12pm
ohmygoodness
the two of you coalesce seamlessly
there's something gorgeously gothic twixt the lines..
a wonderful collab
xo
the two of you coalesce seamlessly
there's something gorgeously gothic twixt the lines..
a wonderful collab
xo
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Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
13th Aug 2017 12:26pm
Aaaaawww...sweetest Katja I thank you for saying such a wonderful thing...we are grateful, n as always deeply appreciate it. :)
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
13th Aug 2017 2:02pm
My dear friend, it's really nice to read this. What a wonderful collaborative work, but I still can recognize your style in it. Glad I have a chance to enjoy this.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
13th Aug 2017 2:08pm
Your astute observation made me smile my sweetness...for Ambur n myself, a big thank you for the kind commentary on this ink. :)
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
13th Aug 2017 11:20pm
What a unique approach!!!!!... Within the darkness of poetry you two flowed as one echo...
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Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
13th Aug 2017 11:25pm
Aaahhh...one echo...I love that! Thank youth much bro. From the two of us, it's deeply appreciated ... :)
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14th Aug 2017 11:11pm
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14th Aug 2017 11:35pm
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15th Aug 2017 4:23am
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16th Aug 2017 3:11am
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15th Aug 2017 11:43am
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15th Aug 2017 12:47pm
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
15th Aug 2017 3:17pm
Hey guys I glad you reposted this piece I think it deserves all praise that you have gotten. When I read this I can see the monster in lurking in the shadow's
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16th Aug 2017 3:23am
Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
31st Aug 2017 4:47am
Your ability to create a piece so dark and vivid is noticible throughout your work. Bravo poets.
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Re: Re. Darkest Delights(collab with RedRose(Ambur)
31st Aug 2017 10:38am
Thank you, I'm pleased you liked our ink blend...n I'm very grateful along with my partner here for the time n thoughts :)