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Good Girls
Pain
Is
Sedative
Time
Is
Relative
Measures
Of
Something
Amounts
To
Nothing
So
Who
Can
Teach
The
Blind
To
See?
Set
Captives
Free?
It
Doesn't
Matter
Some
Girls
Have
It
Some
Girls
Don't
So
Tell
Me
Are
You
Good?
Or
Are
You
Bad?
*Thought inspired by Post, thank you*
Is
Sedative
Time
Is
Relative
Measures
Of
Something
Amounts
To
Nothing
So
Who
Can
Teach
The
Blind
To
See?
Set
Captives
Free?
It
Doesn't
Matter
Some
Girls
Have
It
Some
Girls
Don't
So
Tell
Me
Are
You
Good?
Or
Are
You
Bad?
*Thought inspired by Post, thank you*
Published 7th Aug 2017
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7th Aug 2017 7:45pm
Fairy
I like where you went with this. I'm pleased that you found inspiration from my simple question. Also perhaps it's just a coincidence but I did notice the format you chose :)
As Always, Post
I like where you went with this. I'm pleased that you found inspiration from my simple question. Also perhaps it's just a coincidence but I did notice the format you chose :)
As Always, Post
7th Aug 2017 10:55pm
I'm glad you liked it Post! And yes, coincidence :) I really love this formatting
Anonymous
8th Aug 2017 1:45am
Fairy.. truly brilliant.. keep your chin up.. after reading your work.. i know you're a survivor.. let your warrior soul guide you.. never let anyone define you.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
8th Aug 2017 5:41am
I will continue to, hard to sometimes but better days are on the horizon. I really appreciate the encouragement Dave :)
9th Aug 2017 9:29am
I love this, the way he words fit nicely together and the way you have laid the poem out helps the flow.
Well done keep up the good work.
Well done keep up the good work.
9th Aug 2017 7:15pm
I'm glad this format helps the flow, i know it can be choppy to read but I personally like that about it. Thank you for commenting :)
