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Apéritif
It's when I look my best
the natural blush that rises
from chest to cheeks
hair a little messed
just a hint of gloss
complements the pink
friction-hue of you
on the swell of my lips
There's extra sway
in my sassy gait
more sly in my smile
hunger lights my eyes
Because you leave me ravenous
ready another taste
after such a small sip
When we fuck
before dinner
and you rumble promises
against my skin
of lavish desserts
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Re. Apéritif
Oh nice! Best Apéritif Ever!
I've put my pen down tonight, but will take a closer look tomorrow. For now I just want to enjoy dinner and dessert! This is great! LOL!
I've put my pen down tonight, but will take a closer look tomorrow. For now I just want to enjoy dinner and dessert! This is great! LOL!
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7th Aug 2017 2:12am
Haha... thank you! Your thoughts are always welcome and worth the wait. Enjoy your evening. ;-)
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 2:13am
Enticing ink Paper! What is it about that flush; that natural blush that is evidently so appealing...sounds like dinner and dessert was a hit!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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7th Aug 2017 8:51am
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 11:49am
Erotic as. Good work P.
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7th Aug 2017 6:58pm
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Anonymous
8th Aug 2017 00:34am
i love your sensuality but also you bring
a hint of fragrant aggressiveness
like, example
-you know i want you, there's no secret
or no need to ask, just pay attention because
actions are everything-
sort of like that.. but hey im not good at erotics
though... so it's ok if you turn your head sideways
at the screen ;)
i love it, makes me feel warm and deeply nostalgic
a hint of fragrant aggressiveness
like, example
-you know i want you, there's no secret
or no need to ask, just pay attention because
actions are everything-
sort of like that.. but hey im not good at erotics
though... so it's ok if you turn your head sideways
at the screen ;)
i love it, makes me feel warm and deeply nostalgic
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8th Aug 2017 5:52am
No need to turn sideways, I really like what you've said. So, yes, sort of like that. ;-) I'm glad you love it. Thank you for saying so. :-)
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8th Aug 2017 6:48am
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8th Aug 2017 6:55am
Nothing's better to stimulate the appetite. :-) Thank you for the comment!
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18th Jul 2018 9:42pm
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23rd Jul 2018 11:26am
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
30th Sep 2018 11:04am
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1st Oct 2018 3:02am