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Drama
up
down
crashing
around
flying
up
falling
down
no prediction
every direction
dropping deep
resurrection
spinning nonstop
feeling dizzy
constant motion
no remedy
no highs
without lows
closeness craved
always goes
inevitable
unique ride
two-person seat
side by side
trouble stirs
tiring times
exhaustion
fading lines
holding hands
pulling through
staying strong
to stay with you
down
crashing
around
flying
up
falling
down
no prediction
every direction
dropping deep
resurrection
spinning nonstop
feeling dizzy
constant motion
no remedy
no highs
without lows
closeness craved
always goes
inevitable
unique ride
two-person seat
side by side
trouble stirs
tiring times
exhaustion
fading lines
holding hands
pulling through
staying strong
to stay with you
Published 6th Aug 2017
| Edited 30th May 2022
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6th Aug 2017 1:35am
I like the feel of this one, nice rhymes, nice beat. Well done Rose :)
- Fairy
- Fairy
6th Aug 2017 1:59am
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6th Aug 2017 12:42pm
Drama, reminiscent of a carnival amusement ride, all the turmoil and none of the fun.
Thank you, Post
Thank you, Post
6th Aug 2017 11:05pm
