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Half Tear So Alive
As you gaze upon me too
search for the symmetry
you stare into a whirlpool
speculum of translucency,
do not look up for stars
just look into a mirror,
I fall away from you
into the ocean of
yesterday's tears
waiting for your
smile to foam
from your
fears.
Copyright © 2017 Quietusquill.All Rights Reserved
Published 5th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2017 5:10pm
I really enjoyed this! The flow is amazing and the page layout is awesome:)
5th Aug 2017 5:13pm
Thank you I was hoping some one would catch on to the shape thanx sweetfire 🙂
Anonymous
5th Aug 2017 5:16pm
I've done a couple like this. It added a wonderful touch to your brilliant poem:)
Anonymous
5th Aug 2017 11:57pm
very instinctually beautiful of you, such words are the soothing kind
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2017 4:55pm
Loved this Q!! Uplifting and enlightening while also in my mind's eye, enticing!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
6th Aug 2017 6:24pm
